Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This was an adoreable story and it is something children would love. It allows the children to the helpful heroes of the story and also teaches them about things live in the sea and even a sea animal that looks like a plant I hope you will have no trouble publishing this story as a childrens book.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for this really lovely review, Beth! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

You wrote another beautiful poem for your grand children. I like the cube16 and it sounds very well with a great rhythm. I think you got the iambic meter right, too. The picture of octopus and whales are amazing.

Well done.


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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you so much for this lovely review, Lisa! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Thank you for educating me on a Sea Whip. I had never heard of them, but now I have. I hate seeing this story end, but I'm sure you'll soon have something else great for us to read. Kids will love this story.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

I'd never heard of Sea Whip either until I went looking for something resembling string in the water. I like it more when I can teach children with my stories, I'm going to add a few details of some of the things I've mentioned in the story at the back of the book. It might interest the parents! Lol. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend, and for that goldent sixth star! Warm hugs, Sandra xxx

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine animated cub Sandra and you managed to create a fascinating children's story here with some fine pictures too, much enjoyed, I shall read it to my Grand children, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thank you so much, Dolly, for this lovely review. I do hope your grandchildren enjoy it. I'll be testing it out on my now. My biggest critics! Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Mrs. KT

Exceptional

Kudos, Sandra!
My favorite installment!
Loved the rhymes and action.
Truly smiled when the octopus offered assistance!
Best Wishes on great success with this delightful tale!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Diane, and the golden sixth star! It was fun to write so I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks again! Warm hugs, Sandra xx