Poppy and Odi's Mission
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your children's story continues to be charming, enthralling, well-detailed,
and strong in its message about bravery, needs being met, and assurances that all will end well.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Your children's story continues to be charming, enthralling, well-detailed,
and strong in its message about bravery, needs being met, and assurances that all will end well.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, Janice. I am having a lot of fun writing it. I'm glad you're enjoying reading it. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Another delightful episode. I am sure the kids will love this. When publishing this though I think somewhere there should be a 'don't do thi at home note. We don't want kids pulling polythene bags over their heads pretending they are bubbles full of air.
Sorry to inject a not of cautionary gloom into this, but it is as well to be prepared. Kids do strange things after exposure to books and theatre. I was discovered at the age of four, covered in my father's pipe ash, in the act of jumping off the mantelpiece believing I could fly after a visit to Peter Pan at the local theatre. Apparently pipe ash does not possess the magical qualities of fairy dust.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Another delightful episode. I am sure the kids will love this. When publishing this though I think somewhere there should be a 'don't do thi at home note. We don't want kids pulling polythene bags over their heads pretending they are bubbles full of air.
Sorry to inject a not of cautionary gloom into this, but it is as well to be prepared. Kids do strange things after exposure to books and theatre. I was discovered at the age of four, covered in my father's pipe ash, in the act of jumping off the mantelpiece believing I could fly after a visit to Peter Pan at the local theatre. Apparently pipe ash does not possess the magical qualities of fairy dust.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Yes, I'll be doing that in the book! LOL I can just picture you doing that! You'll have to write that story down. Do I call you Peter in future!!! LOL!
Thank you so much for the sixth star, my friend, and the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. One more to go! :)) Sandra xxx
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I think I was more one of the Lost Boys actually. Lol.
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LOL! You are a nutter sometimes, but I love you for it!! LOL. xxxx
Comment from BethShelby
This story is so cute and clever and I live the short lines of poetry. It is perfect for children. I'm wondering how these kids propose to go about pulling a whale's tooth, but I guess I will learn. It sounds like a daunting task for a real dentist, but in these kind tales anything is possible.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This story is so cute and clever and I live the short lines of poetry. It is perfect for children. I'm wondering how these kids propose to go about pulling a whale's tooth, but I guess I will learn. It sounds like a daunting task for a real dentist, but in these kind tales anything is possible.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Aw, thank you, Beth, I'm really pleased you are enjoying this. I think I have one more part to go, it might be a bit longer though. Thanks for the lovely review, my friednd. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am such a sucker for children's stories and this one has completely captured me. I enjoyed reading and I enjoyed the artwork, understand some photos will be changed. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I am such a sucker for children's stories and this one has completely captured me. I enjoyed reading and I enjoyed the artwork, understand some photos will be changed. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Aw, thank you, Barbara, for this lovely review and the lovely sixth star. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it. I hope to finish it next week, but it might be a bit longer. We'll see. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx