Molly the Mule
A man and his mule.62 total reviews
Comment from Gypsymooncat
That's a bit sad! It's almost like an elderly couple who've been married for years dying within a short time between each other. Poor Molly...what a fate she met! I wonder if Jim ever found gold?
This was an enjoyable poem to read, albeit sad, but it reflects real life I guess. Well done!
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That's a bit sad! It's almost like an elderly couple who've been married for years dying within a short time between each other. Poor Molly...what a fate she met! I wonder if Jim ever found gold?
This was an enjoyable poem to read, albeit sad, but it reflects real life I guess. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Molly the Mule
by Willie P. Smith
Ol Jim cannady and Molly were quite a pair. It's so sad ð??¢ poor Molly. Your poem is a great story. Good luck in the contest.
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Molly the Mule
by Willie P. Smith
Ol Jim cannady and Molly were quite a pair. It's so sad ð??¢ poor Molly. Your poem is a great story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from royowen
What a sad, sad, story in a poem you've written here Willie, so poignantly, yes some people tire of people's treachery and turn to undemanding kinship. Beautifully written my friend, what precious poem, in articulate rhyming couplets, well done, blessings, Roy
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What a sad, sad, story in a poem you've written here Willie, so poignantly, yes some people tire of people's treachery and turn to undemanding kinship. Beautifully written my friend, what precious poem, in articulate rhyming couplets, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Drew Delaney
It ends up to be sad that they both die except if you are referring to them meeting in heaven. These Monorhyme's are well rhymed and have good rhythm. Nice work!
Drew
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It ends up to be sad that they both die except if you are referring to them meeting in heaven. These Monorhyme's are well rhymed and have good rhythm. Nice work!
Drew
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were sad, heartfelt, descriptive and creative. The
author's words were expressed well. They engaged the reader in
wanting to read more. The artwork is great and compliments this poem
well. Have a good week - be well and safe.....
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The author's words were sad, heartfelt, descriptive and creative. The
author's words were expressed well. They engaged the reader in
wanting to read more. The artwork is great and compliments this poem
well. Have a good week - be well and safe.....
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Are, this is really good and sad all at the same time. I know that a special relationship is forged between man and animal. I believe that both relationships are special whether the animal be for work or for companionship. I like how you've presented this and brought it forth. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
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Are, this is really good and sad all at the same time. I know that a special relationship is forged between man and animal. I believe that both relationships are special whether the animal be for work or for companionship. I like how you've presented this and brought it forth. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from rodea
This is really fun to read and well written. Love the theme and how you kept it a live through the language and writing. The rhyming is even done so well and smoothly. Poor Molly the Mule and I thought this was going to be about the beverage, not an actual mule until I saw the Photo. :)
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This is really fun to read and well written. Love the theme and how you kept it a live through the language and writing. The rhyming is even done so well and smoothly. Poor Molly the Mule and I thought this was going to be about the beverage, not an actual mule until I saw the Photo. :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I really like all of this poem except for the lack of rhyme in the last couplet. I would look at that again. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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I really like all of this poem except for the lack of rhyme in the last couplet. I would look at that again. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the correction. Read it now and see what you think. Thank you for the stars.
Comment from J.R. Preston
I really enjoyed Molly the Mule. Original and fun with a tinge of sadness. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, it meets the requirements nicely.
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I really enjoyed Molly the Mule. Original and fun with a tinge of sadness. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, it meets the requirements nicely.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
Comment from LisaMay
How well you have portrayed the tragedy of attachment to an animal - more than just a trail companion to haul his pots and pans. I guess he died of loneliness and a broken heart. I like how you have captured the western feeling in your language and the harsh environment with death by mountain lion.
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How well you have portrayed the tragedy of attachment to an animal - more than just a trail companion to haul his pots and pans. I guess he died of loneliness and a broken heart. I like how you have captured the western feeling in your language and the harsh environment with death by mountain lion.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020