Comment from Praise000

Excellent

Hello,
It is not always easy to make sense
in a few words, in a few lines.
But you managed to get the reader have a clear
picture of what you are writing about in just a few words.
All the best in your writing. From Praise000

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

We surely hear a lot about the themes of love and hate in the current culture. It will take changing hearts to turn the hate into love. Best to you with the entry.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Jean, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, this is really wonderful! I love the antonym you chose, but even more, I love how you illustrated the theme, and in lovely rhyme! This is an excellent entry for this contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Dawn, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

reply by Dawn Munro on 07-May-2015

It was my pleasure. :)

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Good poem with a good picture. Good job of telling the difference between love and hate. I think you did a great job of getting a message out with the guidelines you had to use.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Well I was just thinking about entering this contest, too. This one's a VERY powerful entry, and interesting that you've actually managed a rhyme in 2nd and 3rd lines as well. A graceful, well thought out piece.
:)Sharyn

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Sharyn, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

What an excellent entry for this contest! When I read the rules, I thought it would be nigh on impossible to achieve, but you have managed it splendidly.

Well done, and good luck in the contest with this wonderful entry.

Alexis x

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Alexis, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

Comment from inside echo

Exceptional

Very well written. It speaks truth, you followed perfectly the requirements of this type of poem. You tied all your lines in perfectly. Wonderful flow. Thank you so much for sharing.
echo

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks so much for outstanding review, comments, and exceptional rating,quite

reply by inside echo on 07-May-2015

You're most welcome.
echo

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

HI anon - a very clever Antonym poem. I have not heard of this form but reading this one of yours seems perfect to me. Very good second line which relates to your first, and the third line relates to your last line. Well thought out and I wish you luck in the contest. Good appropriate picture. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Dorothy, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

Very expressive poem. It conforms to the requirements of the contest.
The tone is excellent. Love is something that is sacred. We often dream of a sincere and honest love, something that is heavenly. However, when you do not take care of love, it will lead to hate and, eventually to destruction.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Dom, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,

reply by Dom G Robles on 07-May-2015

Welcome. Dom

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Well you couldn't do better than love and hate for antonyms in a writing prompt contest. The inner verses do well with the theme. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Alan, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,