Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

OK!!! Dean this is the scariest one yet. I couldn't close my eyes when I took a shower after seeing Psycho and I couldn't close my eyes going to bed after seeing the Exorcist , dam it now I can't close my eyes when I'm around my grand kids. If I had a six star I would throw it at you. Dam it! Don

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Hah, thanks, Donald, and it's ironic that you mention the Exorcist. I'm watching it now for probably the one-hundredth time, lol.

Hey, no worries about sixes, if you enjoyed it, and it sent shivers up your spine, then that is reward enoguh for me, my friend.

Thanks for an awesome review!

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Okay I am awake now wow had me going there for a minute poor child is really off her rocker and pops is sleeping in the same house with her. she killed her mom she could have did him into

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

She could've, but her daddy loves her, and she loves her cop pop, whereas her mother was abusive to her. Probably part of the reason she is the way she is.

Thanks for your kind comments and review, country. I really appreciate it!

reply by country ranch writer on 26-Apr-2014

MAKE SENSE TO ME THEN HE WOULD WANT TO KEEP HER OUT OF HARMS WAY. NOT MANY DAD'S WILL

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

You got that right, and that's so sad, don't you think? I would die for my kids, if it came right down to it. I think many parents would.

reply by country ranch writer on 26-Apr-2014

FOR SURE KIDS WOULD ALWAYS COME FIRST, NO MATTER HOW OLD THEY ARE THEY ARE STILL OUR BABIES AND WE FIGHT FOR THEIR RIGHTS AND TO LIVE A HAPPY LIFE IF AT ALL POSSIBLE. COME HELL OR HIGH WATER

Comment from billscott

Exceptional

Absolutely chilling! I thought there was more as I got to the end...

Way cool Dean! Loved it!

Your imagination is gettin so twisted...or it already was.

Love that, either way...

Awesome

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014

Ha ha, well, that's quite a compliment to me, Bill...about being twisted, I mean. I've always been a bit on the darker side of the fence as it pertains to writing fiction. At least, that's where my passions lie, both in reading and in writing.

I'm really glad you enjoyed this, Bill. I was only allowed 500 words to work with, so it had to be brief, but impacting. I hope it succeeded.