I Asked For That One
Contest Entry109 total reviews
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice 5-7-5 fun poem for the contest. Congratulations on winning. Has the correct number of syllables. Nice accompanying picture.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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This is a nice 5-7-5 fun poem for the contest. Congratulations on winning. Has the correct number of syllables. Nice accompanying picture.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thanks my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill
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You're welcome Bill,
Dennis
Comment from Sueellen11
Great entry into the contest,,, great write,, where do these men get off thing women are just slaves to their wimps and sexual satisfaction ,, what pigs,, sorry that's insulting the poor pig,,, I lays say what goes around comes around,, men like this get their just deserts in time,,, that's not love love has no condition. It is a blending of heart mind body and soul,, what egotistical selfish men I call them oxygen thieves ,,great write good luck in the contest,,blessings,,sueellen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Great entry into the contest,,, great write,, where do these men get off thing women are just slaves to their wimps and sexual satisfaction ,, what pigs,, sorry that's insulting the poor pig,,, I lays say what goes around comes around,, men like this get their just deserts in time,,, that's not love love has no condition. It is a blending of heart mind body and soul,, what egotistical selfish men I call them oxygen thieves ,,great write good luck in the contest,,blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thank you Sue Ellen for your great review, I appreciate it very much. And I agree with everything you said about men, even though I am a man. It won the contest. Have a real nice day. Bill
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Excellent congratulations,,, well done a deserving poem,,blessings,,,sueellen
Comment from ELumpkins
Great. I bet a lot of housewives read this and go jump on their husbands. I have known a few of this type husbands over the years. This type always say they work hard on the job all day and deserve a little attention. I wonder!!!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Great. I bet a lot of housewives read this and go jump on their husbands. I have known a few of this type husbands over the years. This type always say they work hard on the job all day and deserve a little attention. I wonder!!!!!!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013
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Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day my friend. Bill
Comment from Cajungirl
HAHAHA, so you didn't get your beer. Here is a six-pack. You deserve it. I can see why you won. This was simply and outstanding 5/7/5 poem contest entry. So very much said in three lines. :}
The picture was worth 1,000 words.LOL
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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HAHAHA, so you didn't get your beer. Here is a six-pack. You deserve it. I can see why you won. This was simply and outstanding 5/7/5 poem contest entry. So very much said in three lines. :}
The picture was worth 1,000 words.LOL
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you my friend for your fantastic review and rating, I appreciate it very much. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. Also, welcome to this site. If I can help you in any way, please let me know. Bill
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Thanks I may take you up on that offer. I could use help.
Comment from ronnie k
Great humor and great acceptance on your part LOL, the picture gave me the laugh I needed to begin the this short burst of laughter, thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Great humor and great acceptance on your part LOL, the picture gave me the laugh I needed to begin the this short burst of laughter, thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks Ronnie for your nice comments, I'm so glad it made you laugh. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from Val Crisson
Nice role reversal here, though most statistics still say women do the majority of the work. But none the less, a very clever and well written five/seven/five poem.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Nice role reversal here, though most statistics still say women do the majority of the work. But none the less, a very clever and well written five/seven/five poem.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you for your review and you won't get an argument from me about women doing most of the work. I totally agree. Have a good day. Bill
Comment from Dustybones
Good job on winning the contest. That would make me want a beer. Like the photo you chose for this five and seven and five.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Good job on winning the contest. That would make me want a beer. Like the photo you chose for this five and seven and five.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks my friend for your review, I appreciate it. Have a good day. Bill
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello
ok
this was the laugh for the day
thank you for that
fabulous presentation to go along with the words
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
thank you for the laugh and smile
congratulations on winning
ann marie
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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hello
ok
this was the laugh for the day
thank you for that
fabulous presentation to go along with the words
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
thank you for the laugh and smile
congratulations on winning
ann marie
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you Ann Marie for your wonderful review, I appreciate all your nice comments. I'm glad it made you laugh my friend. Have a nice day. Bill
Comment from Starlit Ink
This is hilarious. The picture gave me a laugh, and the poem goes with it perfectly. A line like that is sure to get a not very nice response from someone who is tired of housework. At least give her time to take her curlers out, lol. Thanks for the laugh and congratulations.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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This is hilarious. The picture gave me a laugh, and the poem goes with it perfectly. A line like that is sure to get a not very nice response from someone who is tired of housework. At least give her time to take her curlers out, lol. Thanks for the laugh and congratulations.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you my friend for your wonderful review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you laugh, that made it all worthwhile. By the way, those hair curlers are beer cans (ha!). Have a great day. Bill
Comment from fastdigits
Oh, yes, your words were perfection to
go along with the art work you have chosen
which, as I see you were the contest winner,
brought a smile from ear to ear to all who
stopped to read your masterpiece.
Well done
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Oh, yes, your words were perfection to
go along with the art work you have chosen
which, as I see you were the contest winner,
brought a smile from ear to ear to all who
stopped to read your masterpiece.
Well done
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks my friend for your kind words, I appreciate your comments. I'm glad it made you smile. Have a wonderful day. Bill