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My Story (Edited)

I can still taste the metal of the .357 in my mouth...

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Comment from GratefullyRecovering
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I read this and read this again and again and again... I'm starting my own little book because you've inspired me to share my pain with the world too and become better for it.
Your story will save lives, your story has touched mine.
Thank you for sharing every detail, and the details are incredible, imagery, wording... it all flows beautifully. Thank you so much for sharing this. It will save lives.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
    Thanks, sincerely Gratefully. This was an especially hard story for me to write. Finding the words to transfer to paper what I felt that day; it was very, very difficult. If this story can save even one single life, then it would be worth it.
    Thanks so much again!
Comment from BeasPeas
Excellent
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This is truly an amazing and wonderfully written account of your experience. I enjoyed it thoroughly and am so happy you have a happy life. It's impossible to be miserable and grateful at the same time. What happened to you that day was a 'God shot.' I would gladly give you six stars, but I don't have any left (some good writers here on FS). But--consider yourself being given six stars for this piece.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
    A 'God shot'...I like that analogy. I was skeptical about sharing this story. So much so that I asked my Pastor, Richey Pride, what I should do. Being the wise man of God that he is, he asked me, "Well, what does God want you to do with your testimony?" Romans 10:9...'Nuff said about that.
    Thanks again for the lovely review Beas.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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hello my friend this story is amazing it is well written god spoke to you to let you know he was there for you through your difficult time i enjoyed well done regards jill

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
    Thanks Jill. I appreciate you reading it.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, dean, you did an excellent job writing this story about the way God stepped in and spoke to you when you were planning to end it all and put you on a different path. i am glad you are still with us. good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2013
    Thank you. I am glad too!