Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Bev! Great chapter of your story. My mind is all over the place tonight as I wait out the countdown to the start of nanowrimo. I had a tough time following along as I read but that is because my mind is elsewhere. Please forgive me.

"(He) first sight was" - "His"

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012

Joy, thank you so much for your great review and typo alert. I fully understand my friend. It's awfully nice of you to review given your excitement level. Good luck! Hugs, Bev

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Murder cases have not beginning but it is a rough row to how getting to the ending. This is very well written. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.

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 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012

Thanks for your great review, charlie.

reply by c_lucas on 31-Oct-2012

You're welcome, Bev. Charlie