Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Chapter 12; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from The Stranger
Joe certainly has taken a gamble by allowing the sniper to shoot dead one of the gang holding him and the three girls hostage, surely this will provoke a like for like raction from the remaining ostage takers?
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Joe certainly has taken a gamble by allowing the sniper to shoot dead one of the gang holding him and the three girls hostage, surely this will provoke a like for like raction from the remaining ostage takers?
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
This is another great chapter. The tension is thick and I was so sad to see the end at the bottom of the page. I don't know how but I missed the last chapter before I read this one. Good as well
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This is another great chapter. The tension is thick and I was so sad to see the end at the bottom of the page. I don't know how but I missed the last chapter before I read this one. Good as well
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Slow and steady wins the race Barbara. Keep the end in view- it surely is coming.
This is a fabulous story and I'm enjoying it very much. The action is gripping!
Giddy
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Slow and steady wins the race Barbara. Keep the end in view- it surely is coming.
This is a fabulous story and I'm enjoying it very much. The action is gripping!
Giddy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Barbara - my only complaint was that I was sorry to see this post end. I wish I knew how to create and maintain tension like you do. I learn so much from this site and hopefully this is something I will learn from you. On this site, you are the master! Very warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Barbara - my only complaint was that I was sorry to see this post end. I wish I knew how to create and maintain tension like you do. I learn so much from this site and hopefully this is something I will learn from you. On this site, you are the master! Very warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words. I needed that tonight.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara. I'm relieved that Joe could be in the same place as Cassie (at least). You've described the tense situation -- both at Joe's and Sara's -- very well. Can't help wanting for more ... :) I'll be expecting your short essay too, Barbara, I wish the best for you in the chemo processes.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Hi, Barbara. I'm relieved that Joe could be in the same place as Cassie (at least). You've described the tense situation -- both at Joe's and Sara's -- very well. Can't help wanting for more ... :) I'll be expecting your short essay too, Barbara, I wish the best for you in the chemo processes.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from joannesnow
Well written, extremely enjoyable and easy to follow. Your characters come to life and the reader almost feels the fear that the young girl Cassie is experiencing. Joe being a muscular frame seems likely to be Cassie's salvation. Very good imagery and true to life characters. Great drama anxiously awaiting the next pages. Sorry to hear of your health situation. My prayers go out to you.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Well written, extremely enjoyable and easy to follow. Your characters come to life and the reader almost feels the fear that the young girl Cassie is experiencing. Joe being a muscular frame seems likely to be Cassie's salvation. Very good imagery and true to life characters. Great drama anxiously awaiting the next pages. Sorry to hear of your health situation. My prayers go out to you.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your prayers and for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I was so hoping Joe was able to get free of his captors and save Cassie but you are going to make me wait...aren't you? (smile) When I read your chapters my mind never wanders because you make them interesting and full of intrigue. Sara is bound and determined to make George take her to Joe and I don't know how he is going to stop her. I am looking forward to your essay telling about your treatments. Well done. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Hi Barbara,
I was so hoping Joe was able to get free of his captors and save Cassie but you are going to make me wait...aren't you? (smile) When I read your chapters my mind never wanders because you make them interesting and full of intrigue. Sara is bound and determined to make George take her to Joe and I don't know how he is going to stop her. I am looking forward to your essay telling about your treatments. Well done. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Begin Again
Barbara,
You lead us down the path of terror, yet still show us how brave and committed these men are to save the young girls. A marvelous story filled with heart.
Wishing you the best in your own test of determination and perserverance. You have done a fine job of combatting the evil and we all know that good will win...
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Barbara,
You lead us down the path of terror, yet still show us how brave and committed these men are to save the young girls. A marvelous story filled with heart.
Wishing you the best in your own test of determination and perserverance. You have done a fine job of combatting the evil and we all know that good will win...
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
It's getting really interesting now, nail-biting, edge-of-seat interesting. I surely hope they all get out alive and that the girls haven't been traumatized too much.
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It's getting really interesting now, nail-biting, edge-of-seat interesting. I surely hope they all get out alive and that the girls haven't been traumatized too much.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bowls
Glad you're finished phase one; hope phase two is easier, but I'll just wait and read your essay to find out.
This was a very exciting chapter. I can't wait for everyone to be reunited, but I'll also be sorry when the sorry comes to an end. I feel like I know these characters and don't want to lose touch with them. I guess it's all your fault for creating such realistic and admirable characters. Best wishes go out to you!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Glad you're finished phase one; hope phase two is easier, but I'll just wait and read your essay to find out.
This was a very exciting chapter. I can't wait for everyone to be reunited, but I'll also be sorry when the sorry comes to an end. I feel like I know these characters and don't want to lose touch with them. I guess it's all your fault for creating such realistic and admirable characters. Best wishes go out to you!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and encouragment.