Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Chaptet 9; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
71 total reviews
Comment from patmedium
Well written and thoroughly enjoyed, dear.
And WE all wish that we could give you a hug, too, Barbara. Much love, dear. I wish I coulkd drop in and give you a chuckle. I'd gather up your hair to use for a picture of some sort. Hair is NOTHING ... pure ego! Living is EVERYTHING, dear! Buy yourself some of those fun hairpieces ... a different colour for each day of the week!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Well written and thoroughly enjoyed, dear.
And WE all wish that we could give you a hug, too, Barbara. Much love, dear. I wish I coulkd drop in and give you a chuckle. I'd gather up your hair to use for a picture of some sort. Hair is NOTHING ... pure ego! Living is EVERYTHING, dear! Buy yourself some of those fun hairpieces ... a different colour for each day of the week!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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I am planning on it. I have come to terms with the fact that the issue is just vanity and nothing worth getting upset over. I had my little pity party now, I am ready. You helped me get to that point.
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Lovely. Much love to you, dear friend. xxx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is so well told and written,
making it easy to follow - the
conversation between Joe and Sara
flowing naturally, and Sara's torment
over her daughter could be felt - a
sign of good writing.
All in all, a most impressive chapter, and
deserving of a six.
Remember, we are all thinking of you, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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This is so well told and written,
making it easy to follow - the
conversation between Joe and Sara
flowing naturally, and Sara's torment
over her daughter could be felt - a
sign of good writing.
All in all, a most impressive chapter, and
deserving of a six.
Remember, we are all thinking of you, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your encouragement and support.
Comment from Sefiros
I just got into this chapter without reading the previous one, but there's enough character interaction that puts me directly into the story. The story doesn't drag along. Impressive.
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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I just got into this chapter without reading the previous one, but there's enough character interaction that puts me directly into the story. The story doesn't drag along. Impressive.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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I take it from your review that you liked my chapter. Why did I get a 4. I don't understand what changes to make.
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Because my policy is there's always room for improvement.
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I understand, and I am sure I have things to correct, but I wish you would tell me what you think needs to be corrected.
Comment from RKagan
This is a great chapter, I cried when Sara talked about the day she gave birth. I am sure that would be so realistic in this situation. I also know Joe would never hurt her or Cassie.
I read your author notes and I want you to know I am here for you if you need to talk about anything at all feel free to PM me at any time. God Bless you, my prayers are with you. Try to stay as positive as you can. I know how hard the hair loss is on women, but I really want you to know that it does come back. And usually prettier! Please, Barbara, if you need me, don't hesitate to contact me.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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This is a great chapter, I cried when Sara talked about the day she gave birth. I am sure that would be so realistic in this situation. I also know Joe would never hurt her or Cassie.
I read your author notes and I want you to know I am here for you if you need to talk about anything at all feel free to PM me at any time. God Bless you, my prayers are with you. Try to stay as positive as you can. I know how hard the hair loss is on women, but I really want you to know that it does come back. And usually prettier! Please, Barbara, if you need me, don't hesitate to contact me.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your friendship. It means so much to me.
Comment from marcii
You got to feel for Joe here he has a job to do and knowing it is the woman he loves daughter he needs to locate a free from danger must be hard enough. He also has to do it on no sleep or very little.
I'm sure it is all your well wishes including myself that would love to hug you and be their for you.
Marcii
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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You got to feel for Joe here he has a job to do and knowing it is the woman he loves daughter he needs to locate a free from danger must be hard enough. He also has to do it on no sleep or very little.
I'm sure it is all your well wishes including myself that would love to hug you and be their for you.
Marcii
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Heidixoxo
Praise to God that you are hanging in there and being strong Barbara!! Amazes me to see that you have already written and posted another fantastic piece to this already great story. I always like reading your work. Best of luck with this and cant wait to read more. Stay strong my friend!! xoxo
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Praise to God that you are hanging in there and being strong Barbara!! Amazes me to see that you have already written and posted another fantastic piece to this already great story. I always like reading your work. Best of luck with this and cant wait to read more. Stay strong my friend!! xoxo
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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This novel is already complete. All I have to do is edit and edit and re edit. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from essence56
Very good chapter once again. I'll be lad when I can get off the edge of my chair, Smile.. Thank God you are doing well and I have faith that you will bet stronger soon. I can tell you are a frighter and strong woman from your writing. God bless Barb. My prayers are with you girl.. Oh, and by the way...HUGGGGGs
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Very good chapter once again. I'll be lad when I can get off the edge of my chair, Smile.. Thank God you are doing well and I have faith that you will bet stronger soon. I can tell you are a frighter and strong woman from your writing. God bless Barb. My prayers are with you girl.. Oh, and by the way...HUGGGGGs
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for the HUGGGGs, I needed them this morning.
Comment from LadyWave
I'm glad Sara and Joe have made some peace. I feel like we're getting closer to finding Cassie! Hope you have a better day tomorrow!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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I'm glad Sara and Joe have made some peace. I feel like we're getting closer to finding Cassie! Hope you have a better day tomorrow!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
This chapter is getting more exciting while revealing Joe's and Sara's characterization even better than before. The way you write or at least edit this, how regularly you post your chapters, show us how strong you are in facing your treatments. I'm sure you would conquer all.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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This chapter is getting more exciting while revealing Joe's and Sara's characterization even better than before. The way you write or at least edit this, how regularly you post your chapters, show us how strong you are in facing your treatments. I'm sure you would conquer all.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. This novel was complete before I ever started posted it. I do edit and edit and edit throughout the week.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbra, what a horrible situation to think that your daughter might be killed and you would feel so helpless. I can't even imagine how I would feel. You make this story come alive and I can so feel her pain and anxiety. Good job and always. And keep doing a good job for yourself as well.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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Barbra, what a horrible situation to think that your daughter might be killed and you would feel so helpless. I can't even imagine how I would feel. You make this story come alive and I can so feel her pain and anxiety. Good job and always. And keep doing a good job for yourself as well.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review,