Comment from lola29

Excellent

Wow! I wish I had six stars to give you. That was brilliant writing. You've gift of pen has allowed you to convey how this beautiful felt about herself - OMG! Sooo sad. I could actually feel this woman's loathing of herself. Bravo!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2009

Thank you Lola, I am very happy you liked it, i had doubts about posting it...

reply by lola29 on 06-Sep-2009

Are you kidding me? This story is a sure fire winner. I absolutely love your writing.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Apelle

This a fantastic selection for the contest. Your words describe the emptiness she must exist in in order to survive another day. How terribly sad. You wrote this very very well. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a great contender.

Carol

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2009

Thank you Carol, I am very happy you liked it, i had doubts about posting it...

Comment from darkgreennights

Excellent

Wow that was cool. It reminded me of this really old liz taylor movie butterfield 8 when she was young and really beautiful she was a prostitute but she kept her heart to herself. Great entry!
Kathleen

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 Comment Written 06-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2009

Thank you Kathleen, I really appreciate your kind words, and yes , I remember the movie....

reply by darkgreennights on 06-Sep-2009

you are welcome it was great!