Poppy and Odi's Mission
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Comment from Anne Johnston
Another great chapter in your book. I found it interesting that when you were doing this part that you had a problem with a tooth and had to have it pulled. Hope you didn't have any lasting effects from it. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Another great chapter in your book. I found it interesting that when you were doing this part that you had a problem with a tooth and had to have it pulled. Hope you didn't have any lasting effects from it. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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It took a few days for the bruising to go down after he'd pulled it out. I was a really sad bunny for a few days. I know how much the whale is looking forward to getting his pulled. Lol. But, I'm giving him Poppy and Odi, they'll be a lot nicer than my dentist was!
Thank you so much for your lovely review, Anne, I really appreciated it. And a big hug for the sixth gold star! That was so kind of you. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome, Sandra
Comment from damommy
They've made it down to help the whale. I love the idea that the shark was friendly. Poor whale. I hope the dental work is successful. I notice the whale's dorsal in is laying over on his back, a sign that all is not right with him.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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They've made it down to help the whale. I love the idea that the shark was friendly. Poor whale. I hope the dental work is successful. I notice the whale's dorsal in is laying over on his back, a sign that all is not right with him.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I see that with a lot of whales in captivity, it's not right. They need to be free, not pander to the spectators.
Thank you so muchm my lovely SATP, for this fabulous review and the sixth gold star. You are my bestest sister ever!! I'm hoping the next part will be the final chapter, it might be a tad longer though. Thank you dear one. Love you lots, and sending humongous hugs. :)) Sandra xxxx
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I don't mind if it's longer. It's a sweet story that everyone is loving. I love you, too, dear sister!
Comment from dragonpoet
Sandra,
You have continued the story well and mixed it with good illustrations.
You stopped it at a good point. These are very kind and brave children.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sandra,
You have continued the story well and mixed it with good illustrations.
You stopped it at a good point. These are very kind and brave children.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Joan! I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. The last (long) part coming soon. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
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You are most kindly welcome, Sandra
Joan
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Oh, my - I so am enjoying this story and the great pictures. This will be an ideal Children's book, and for old ladies too! Imagination is a wonderful thing and you provide it with elan and flair. Ready for more!!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Oh, my - I so am enjoying this story and the great pictures. This will be an ideal Children's book, and for old ladies too! Imagination is a wonderful thing and you provide it with elan and flair. Ready for more!!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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LOL, I think we oldies go back to the fun times we had as children, and why not? I love thinking up these stories. I just wish I could have actually lived the stories! :))
Thank you so much, Sherry, for this lovely review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Begin Again
Oh a dentist and a broken tooth...You deserved a then star just for that! I am beyond terrified of dentists...a military one put his drill through the top of my mouth...details not necessary but I've been shaking at the thought ever since.
As for the delicious poem for children and adults alike, it's so special. What a lesson for all of us to learn about those who are different than us and how to be helpful and kind to all.
Absolutely stunning! Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Oh a dentist and a broken tooth...You deserved a then star just for that! I am beyond terrified of dentists...a military one put his drill through the top of my mouth...details not necessary but I've been shaking at the thought ever since.
As for the delicious poem for children and adults alike, it's so special. What a lesson for all of us to learn about those who are different than us and how to be helpful and kind to all.
Absolutely stunning! Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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It was a painful week, and I don't want to go down that road again!
Thank you so much for the sixth star, dear Carol, and the wonderful review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading it, and liked the message I'm sending out. You're a lovely lady, my friend. Sending you a warm hug and love. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from blondie560
Oh Sandra I'm so sorry for you own tooth. I hope when you were having it done you were thinking of your story to take your mind off it. These children will have quite a tale to tell their friends! Looking forward to see what happens next. Have a good week, hope it's better than last week! Hugs:) Sally
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Oh Sandra I'm so sorry for you own tooth. I hope when you were having it done you were thinking of your story to take your mind off it. These children will have quite a tale to tell their friends! Looking forward to see what happens next. Have a good week, hope it's better than last week! Hugs:) Sally
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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It's a lot better now, Sally, but he wasn't the slightest bit worried about how bruised I ended up. Nightmare!
Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend, and the lovely sixth star. I'm so pleased you are enjoying it. One (long) part left! Warm hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
I can't wait until Poppy and Odi actually see this. You seem to have captured their personalities perfectly, and the fact that they adore swimming makes this delightful adventure even more personal. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Alexis xxxxxx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I can't wait until Poppy and Odi actually see this. You seem to have captured their personalities perfectly, and the fact that they adore swimming makes this delightful adventure even more personal. Thank you again, my wonderful friend!
Alexis xxxxxx
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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You are so welcome, Alexis. Seeing Poppy and Odi with my first colouring book was amazing. I loved their enthusiasm. So a big thank you, for giving me the inspiration for this one and I just hope they enjoy it. Thank you for the golden star, dear friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
nice presentation, Sandra.
-Your notes are appreciated;
Poppy and Odi might have
been a very good choice.
-The whale actually gets
very good attention and care!
-The bubbles for air might
have been helpful for you, too.
-But alas, Poppy and Odi
did not expect the shark.
-I like the comparison to
a submarine!
-Looks like the whale will
have to wait a little longer.
-A good chapter continuing
this whale of a tale!!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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-Great artwork and
nice presentation, Sandra.
-Your notes are appreciated;
Poppy and Odi might have
been a very good choice.
-The whale actually gets
very good attention and care!
-The bubbles for air might
have been helpful for you, too.
-But alas, Poppy and Odi
did not expect the shark.
-I like the comparison to
a submarine!
-Looks like the whale will
have to wait a little longer.
-A good chapter continuing
this whale of a tale!!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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When I saw the shark cartoon of a submarine, I just had to use it! And it's one I can keep. Thank you so much, Pam, for this brilliant review and for the sixth golden star. I really appreciate all your comments, always. Sending you love and hugs, my friend, Sandra xxxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra, plus the added dental puns. I tried to go easy on those! You are doing a good job with the poem and story.
Comment from kintesiegel2
The author chooses sea creatures that are usually depicted as scary and all powerful to introduce children to the natural world! Adorable narrative. Good introduction to nature.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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The author chooses sea creatures that are usually depicted as scary and all powerful to introduce children to the natural world! Adorable narrative. Good introduction to nature.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for reading this part. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Ben Colder
Girl! your something else. What a talented lady you are. This is your specialty. No doubt your grandchildren love their Grandmother. Well done Sandy, as always. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Girl! your something else. What a talented lady you are. This is your specialty. No doubt your grandchildren love their Grandmother. Well done Sandy, as always. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Hi Chuck, thank you so much for this great review and all the lovely stars. I do love writing for children, it warms my heart to see their faces when they see their names appear. Thanks, my dear friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx