Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

eight syllables that tell
the tale of the joys of
the summertime and all its
fun-filled moments.l
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks so much. Hope your summer is filled with fun times!

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Aww, they look like they are really having fun!
Quick poem, nice glowing feelings.
Why are the shortest poems, the hardest to write? For me, it's taking lots of thoughts and trying to congeal them, and still convey meaning.
Yours is very well done,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks, Rhonda.
Love the lake...sun? ....not so much anymore...lol

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 31-May-2016

I hear that! Why don't children feel the sun? Oh, well, one of those "why's" to add to my list of getting older!

Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

Nicely written to describe that fun place. Your poem form is exemplary. You creatively use words to meet the 2/4/2 to describe that place. The poem has clarity that one get tanned while being in the sun. Your illustration of the photo to enhance what fun is, and fun is on that raft out in the sun to bet sun tan. Best.

 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks so much for reviewing this short little ditty!

Comment from create4christ

Excellent

You have chosen a great picture to go with your poem...precious nieces! Your poem describes you picture nicely. Your 2-4-2 structure is perfect. This is a great 2-4-2 POETRY contest entry. Good luck!

Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 31-May-2016

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reply by the author on 31-May-2016

Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. God bless! :-)