Down the Rabbit's Hole
Just don't do it.64 total reviews
Comment from write hand blue
Yes drugs have always been used by performers and date back long before the 1960s, Mario Lanza is a good example.
I was greatly saddened when Jimi Hendrix died, I still listen to his inspired guitar playing.
A well described journey of descent down the rabbit hole. Written to your high standard with animated pictures.
Impeccable, creative and so inspiring.
:) Mel.
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Yes drugs have always been used by performers and date back long before the 1960s, Mario Lanza is a good example.
I was greatly saddened when Jimi Hendrix died, I still listen to his inspired guitar playing.
A well described journey of descent down the rabbit hole. Written to your high standard with animated pictures.
Impeccable, creative and so inspiring.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from royowen
Well written Dean, and well researched, I sung in a rock band back in the sixties, and I sung some of these songs, I'm not entirely sure I agree that some have the background of these songs, but I was aware of the theories, but it doesn't detract that this was beautifully scribed, of course the design and background is outstanding and so is the sewn in songs, nice general rhyming, even effective meter, good stuff mate, blessings, Roy.
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Well written Dean, and well researched, I sung in a rock band back in the sixties, and I sung some of these songs, I'm not entirely sure I agree that some have the background of these songs, but I was aware of the theories, but it doesn't detract that this was beautifully scribed, of course the design and background is outstanding and so is the sewn in songs, nice general rhyming, even effective meter, good stuff mate, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Dean - This is a dazzling piece of writing. I never liked the story of Alice in Wonderland. It's considered a classic but I found it weird, like a nightmare. But I love your references and the display, as usual, is exemplary - how do you do it. Your reference to Psychedelic delicacies - I think Lewis Carroll was partaking some of these when he wrote this story. Your poem gives some great references to great performers and their music. I love 'Lucy in the sky with diamonds' and 'Puff the magic dragon' we, my kids and I sang that one a lot. Great deal of work went into both your poem and author notes - Very well written - I feel dizzy after all the movement in your display. You deserve your rank near the top. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hi Dean - This is a dazzling piece of writing. I never liked the story of Alice in Wonderland. It's considered a classic but I found it weird, like a nightmare. But I love your references and the display, as usual, is exemplary - how do you do it. Your reference to Psychedelic delicacies - I think Lewis Carroll was partaking some of these when he wrote this story. Your poem gives some great references to great performers and their music. I love 'Lucy in the sky with diamonds' and 'Puff the magic dragon' we, my kids and I sang that one a lot. Great deal of work went into both your poem and author notes - Very well written - I feel dizzy after all the movement in your display. You deserve your rank near the top. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from daeneam
It's very long, but very informative and helpful. I still like Puff the Magic Dragon and Horse with No Name. I didn't know it's about drugs.
I think, taking drugs results from their hollow success.
Greatly penned c", mae
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It's very long, but very informative and helpful. I still like Puff the Magic Dragon and Horse with No Name. I didn't know it's about drugs.
I think, taking drugs results from their hollow success.
Greatly penned c", mae
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
When I read it, I read it as a thrilling take on the original story. Ah, but the notes make a lot of the phrases clear. You've used so many references. that is amazing.. And it has a message too. This is really good! Well done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>(^_^)
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Hello there~!
When I read it, I read it as a thrilling take on the original story. Ah, but the notes make a lot of the phrases clear. You've used so many references. that is amazing.. And it has a message too. This is really good! Well done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>(^_^)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from patcelaw
Dean this is a good poem and I enjoyed reading. The fact is there are so many who are being led astray by the music industry with the music glorying drugs, homosexuality and prostitution. We are in a day when they are calling evil good and good evil. We as Christians need to pray like never before for the youth of our world that they will not be drawn into the rabbit's hole. Patricia
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Dean this is a good poem and I enjoyed reading. The fact is there are so many who are being led astray by the music industry with the music glorying drugs, homosexuality and prostitution. We are in a day when they are calling evil good and good evil. We as Christians need to pray like never before for the youth of our world that they will not be drawn into the rabbit's hole. Patricia
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from LIJ Red
Horror? That's hearing Joplin scream and Jefferson Airplane
go on about White Rabbits in the Nam bush or the Aleutians.
Whiter Shade of Pale haunted us....missed it all. Puff was a DC3 Dakota fitted with broadsides of miniguns...
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Horror? That's hearing Joplin scream and Jefferson Airplane
go on about White Rabbits in the Nam bush or the Aleutians.
Whiter Shade of Pale haunted us....missed it all. Puff was a DC3 Dakota fitted with broadsides of miniguns...
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from kiwijenny
I get it ...I say don't do drugs too who needs it when our minds can do what yours does....I loved the jabberwocky Aliceness of it....and the rock songs..Alice Cooper in there ?
Well done again my friend...fiend
God bless
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I get it ...I say don't do drugs too who needs it when our minds can do what yours does....I loved the jabberwocky Aliceness of it....and the rock songs..Alice Cooper in there ?
Well done again my friend...fiend
God bless
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from emrpoems
Your innovation doesn't need man-made chemicals to take seed.
Creativity isn't dead -- it lives, lies dormant in our head.
Strong closing lines and god advice.
Reviewing your poems is always a treat and all I need to say is WEll DONE!!!!!!
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Your innovation doesn't need man-made chemicals to take seed.
Creativity isn't dead -- it lives, lies dormant in our head.
Strong closing lines and god advice.
Reviewing your poems is always a treat and all I need to say is WEll DONE!!!!!!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Those were wild days, the drugs were everywhere. I loved the music of those days, but fortunately I wasn't quite old enough to understand that a lot were about drugs, nor old enough to go where you could get them. Drugs are still being taken by our pop stars and musicians, they never learn. Excellent poem, Dean. xsx Sandra
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Those were wild days, the drugs were everywhere. I loved the music of those days, but fortunately I wasn't quite old enough to understand that a lot were about drugs, nor old enough to go where you could get them. Drugs are still being taken by our pop stars and musicians, they never learn. Excellent poem, Dean. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 11-Jan-2015