Inner Impressions
Often, listening to that inner voice will provide answers...45 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is very eloquently written, with a very inspirational message backing it up. I must say though, for me, this is easier said than done. It's very hard to keep that "stiff upper lip" when your health begins to fail you. You trudge on, though, day after day, hoping this one won't be your last.
I loved the poem, it's a poignant, sweet sentiment penned to a friend in need. You can't fault the motive in that...
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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This is very eloquently written, with a very inspirational message backing it up. I must say though, for me, this is easier said than done. It's very hard to keep that "stiff upper lip" when your health begins to fail you. You trudge on, though, day after day, hoping this one won't be your last.
I loved the poem, it's a poignant, sweet sentiment penned to a friend in need. You can't fault the motive in that...
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Dean, for this stellar review, it warmed my heart! I understand what you're saying, but one way to deal with the failing health is to keep a picture of you within view of when your health was good. Look at it often and speak to that person. Say aloud to your health it will be restored as it was at the point in the picture. Don't doubt it, no matter how you feel. Proverb 18:22 tells us that life and death are in the power of the tongue. Believe it, my friend, because it's true. Be blessed, Dossie
Comment from Treischel
Beautiful sentiments eloquently expressed in this lively free verse poem of encouragement, giving sage advice, wise words to your depressed friend. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Beautiful sentiments eloquently expressed in this lively free verse poem of encouragement, giving sage advice, wise words to your depressed friend. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Treischel, for an encouraging review, I appreciate it! Be blessed, Dossie
Comment from Titan Black
This is a very inspirational poem. I felt like
You were talking to me. And I plan to take all
Of the advice, that you gave me. For, you inspire
Me. Keep up the good work. And don't forget to
Let me know what you think of my poetry. If you
Really like it, hit that 'fan' button.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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This is a very inspirational poem. I felt like
You were talking to me. And I plan to take all
Of the advice, that you gave me. For, you inspire
Me. Keep up the good work. And don't forget to
Let me know what you think of my poetry. If you
Really like it, hit that 'fan' button.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Titan Black, for this excellent review. If you can write a vision for your life down in a clear and concise manner and believe all will materialize, they will. Try listening to those inner impressions or whispers and heeding them; you will have a much lighter and more productive life if you do. As for your poetry, keep writing. The more you write the better you will become. You might want to jot down ideas as they come to you, but rather than write about them immediately, allow them to marinate in your mind. When you feel you have the whole poem clear in your mind, write it and read it aloud. If it sounds good to you, post it. I hope that helped! Be blessed, Dossie
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No problem. I shall do so. And remember,
To let me know what you think of my poetry.
If you like it, hit that 'fan' button. Hopefully,
This will be the start of our net working.
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Titan Black, I generally become a fan because there's something about an author 's or a poet's work that resonates with me. If I become a fan and review and rate your work, I expect reciprocity. So hopefully, ours will be a fruitful relationship where each of us can learn something from each other. I'm hoping that you will always post your best, I didn't say perfection, because none of us is perfect. Peace, Dossie
Comment from Angels27
Very uplifting writing Titan. Everyone of us do go through phases of self doubt and only our self confidence can help us overcome that. Indeed they are the best counsel we can receive.
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Very uplifting writing Titan. Everyone of us do go through phases of self doubt and only our self confidence can help us overcome that. Indeed they are the best counsel we can receive.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Angels27, for an encouraging review! You are so right, that voice inside of each of us is the best counsel we will ever receive. Be blessed!
Comment from Gungalo
Let them dare you to believe, and you will
Banish insecurities and conquer all doubts.
Wonderful Titan and I can see how it may have helped her out. Such nice warm feelings come from this write. Awesome girl.
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Let them dare you to believe, and you will
Banish insecurities and conquer all doubts.
Wonderful Titan and I can see how it may have helped her out. Such nice warm feelings come from this write. Awesome girl.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Gungalo, for this glowing review. I appreciate it!
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