A Little Viking's Tale
A rhyming short story for children122 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
When targeting young adults, I think meter and rhyme are essential. Your rhyme is good, but the meter could be cleaned up a bit to smooth out the reading.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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When targeting young adults, I think meter and rhyme are essential. Your rhyme is good, but the meter could be cleaned up a bit to smooth out the reading.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review
Comment from BLACKDYKE
A complete story in rhyme and
an entertaining one at that Eric'.
Not too serious but with a certain message for all to learn by. Good
colour and picture to accompany. Eric
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A complete story in rhyme and
an entertaining one at that Eric'.
Not too serious but with a certain message for all to learn by. Good
colour and picture to accompany. Eric
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
Comment from gazzagodbod
love that last stanza fabulous moral to end a wonderful story love the little Viking thank you so much my friend i loved it gazzagodbod
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love that last stanza fabulous moral to end a wonderful story love the little Viking thank you so much my friend i loved it gazzagodbod
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
The moral that's here should be very clear
Don't let anything get in your way
No matter how big or scary it is
you can handle it...come what may
This big kid enjoyed this - the content,
the flow to the words, and to both rhythm
and rhyme, all excellent - a great little
story and the picture's so cute.
Margaret
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The moral that's here should be very clear
Don't let anything get in your way
No matter how big or scary it is
you can handle it...come what may
This big kid enjoyed this - the content,
the flow to the words, and to both rhythm
and rhyme, all excellent - a great little
story and the picture's so cute.
Margaret
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
Comment from speakup
This poem is the best that I have read on this site in it's categorie and your work deserves the top spot, not only on this site but in all other places it will be public. Please continue the stories they are bigger than Mother Goose. Great great work.
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This poem is the best that I have read on this site in it's categorie and your work deserves the top spot, not only on this site but in all other places it will be public. Please continue the stories they are bigger than Mother Goose. Great great work.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi EricDaGoose
Interesting story in saga form, one wonders what a Viking would make of our modern world.
Nicely done story, it paints your word picture well.
Patrick
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Hi EricDaGoose
Interesting story in saga form, one wonders what a Viking would make of our modern world.
Nicely done story, it paints your word picture well.
Patrick
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a long and interesting story to read. It had a strong message to give and was easy to pick-up on. A cute image choice too. CG
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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This was a long and interesting story to read. It had a strong message to give and was easy to pick-up on. A cute image choice too. CG
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Thanks much CG
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose for your cute little poem. You had my attention from the first line to the last.
I think is i a well learning poem for people of all ages could remember.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful children poem.
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I love the artwork you choose for your cute little poem. You had my attention from the first line to the last.
I think is i a well learning poem for people of all ages could remember.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful children poem.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
Comment from GarthL
Compelling reading top to bottom and one great message to deliver as well. I really like the image of Eric portrayed in the illustration and the color palette choice for your presentation. Excellent writing, great read, thank you very much. Thought 'and all of my songs have now come un-sungs' was brilliant. Well written!! Those Stop signs can cause problems!? Write On, Garth
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Compelling reading top to bottom and one great message to deliver as well. I really like the image of Eric portrayed in the illustration and the color palette choice for your presentation. Excellent writing, great read, thank you very much. Thought 'and all of my songs have now come un-sungs' was brilliant. Well written!! Those Stop signs can cause problems!? Write On, Garth
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012
Comment from Angel Debbie
This is a great story! I love the flow and the important message it ends with.The moral that's here should be very clear
Don't let anything get in your way
No matter how big or scary it is
you can handle it...come what may
Super write! Thanks for sharing.
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This is a great story! I love the flow and the important message it ends with.The moral that's here should be very clear
Don't let anything get in your way
No matter how big or scary it is
you can handle it...come what may
Super write! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2012