Of All The Gin Joints
It could only describe one movie45 total reviews
Comment from LucyB
Ooooo! I like it! Humphrey is a good lookin' man and you sre a good poet so that obviously made for a great combination. Good job on something that is not easy to do.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Ooooo! I like it! Humphrey is a good lookin' man and you sre a good poet so that obviously made for a great combination. Good job on something that is not easy to do.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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He's a looker alright. Glad you liked my poem. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Fluffyhead
Everybody pretty much likes that movie cuz ( a) bogie just cute in a rugged weary sort of way and its so timeless and could happen right now. Love your premise
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Everybody pretty much likes that movie cuz ( a) bogie just cute in a rugged weary sort of way and its so timeless and could happen right now. Love your premise
Comment Written 22-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from purrfect tale
I really liked this, but your middle line has eight syllables, re-u-nit-ed has 4 on it's own. Delete the word 'For' at the beginning and your meaning will be the same and the syllable count will be correct.
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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I really liked this, but your middle line has eight syllables, re-u-nit-ed has 4 on it's own. Delete the word 'For' at the beginning and your meaning will be the same and the syllable count will be correct.
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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It's fixed. Thanks for catching it.
Comment from adewpearl
Love the illustration, love this movie
I like that this sounds like a review, not just a summary
and I like the rhyming of reunited/delighted
my only criticism is that your middle line has 8 syllables where it should have 7
for/two/lov/ers/re/un/it/ed
you really should fix that for the contest
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Love the illustration, love this movie
I like that this sounds like a review, not just a summary
and I like the rhyming of reunited/delighted
my only criticism is that your middle line has 8 syllables where it should have 7
for/two/lov/ers/re/un/it/ed
you really should fix that for the contest
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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Yep, it's fixed already. Thanks for catching it.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I love that movie and have seen it a jillion times. I never fail to be delighted by it. The reason I'm giving this only four stars is that the second line has one too many syllables according to the rules of this contest; it should have only 7 but has 8. If you edit this, let me know and I will edit the rating. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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I love that movie and have seen it a jillion times. I never fail to be delighted by it. The reason I'm giving this only four stars is that the second line has one too many syllables according to the rules of this contest; it should have only 7 but has 8. If you edit this, let me know and I will edit the rating. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2012
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I'll fix it right now.
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It's fixed. Thanks for catching that.
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Great. I've edited to 5 stars.