Comment from JaphetMphande

Exceptional

From the start, this poem gives me the interest to get into the minds of Mr President who seems not to have a good night for all the deaths that can be put in his hands and all the securities he needs.

Dream well Mr President. Nice poem throughout. Souls are perishing, governments are being looted by allies of Mr President because he can dream that he has thieves around him, the poor continue to be poor etc.

I liked your poem very much, thank you.

Because it speaks not only for an individual but for many on behalf of the world, you deserve more from my ratings, how about 6.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Glad you liked it so much. And it still applies and to us all. Thanks so much for the beautiful six.

Comment from peggles

Exceptional

This was so sad and deep
My heart was crying as Iread your
Expressive words
Those in power can have
No thoughts of those who give their all
In their name
I thought this was anexcelent piece
Well done

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012

Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Pleased you liked it so much. It is still applicable now. Thanks for the lovely six.