Comment from kayjex40

Excellent

A very different view of Halloween, but I can see it working. This would make a good Halloween commercial for a museum.Good work!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011

Thanks! Elaine

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, mermaids, a great job wriitng this poem about the ghosts of dinosaurs, i enjoyed reading it especially about them following the mailman...

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011

I appreciate your reading and enjoying this unusual poem. Elaine

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Effective use of high-impact verbs that bring these dino spirits to life as they munch and stomp and growl :-)
I like the consonance of hard C sounds in evoking my curiosity
Elaine, I love the idea that dino spirits roam the speaker's neighborhood during Halloween season - this was a delight to read :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011

Thanks so much for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello mermaids
Very unique Halloween poem
Just to think about that on the most scariest night of the year with the souls of dinosaurs roaming around
long as they are peaceable I wouldn't mine

Gert



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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2011

Thanks for reading and enjoying this unusual Halloween poem. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 12-Oct-2011

You are welcome Elaine
Gert