Another Pretty Face
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Comment from gerry26
This is a wonderful read. We see a side of Joe that we never saw before, You leave the reader wondering if Cassie can accept the other side of the man she loves. Good dialog and pace.
So happy to hear the good news.
gerry
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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This is a wonderful read. We see a side of Joe that we never saw before, You leave the reader wondering if Cassie can accept the other side of the man she loves. Good dialog and pace.
So happy to hear the good news.
gerry
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
This is a well-written and interesting chapter in your book which I enjoyed reading. Joe, despite his great strength, is clearly a true gentleman and now Sara has a new friend in the person of Dani.
There is just one small change to suggest ...
* You have - I better get started. This should be -
I had better get started.
Now, I look forward to the next chapter and, referring to what you have written in your Notes, you remain in my thoughts and prayers.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ....
This is a well-written and interesting chapter in your book which I enjoyed reading. Joe, despite his great strength, is clearly a true gentleman and now Sara has a new friend in the person of Dani.
There is just one small change to suggest ...
* You have - I better get started. This should be -
I had better get started.
Now, I look forward to the next chapter and, referring to what you have written in your Notes, you remain in my thoughts and prayers.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your prayers. I will make that correction.
Comment from FredCollingwood
I really enjoy your book, but I like your author notes better. You still have a lot to go through, but it sounds like things are looking up.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I really enjoy your book, but I like your author notes better. You still have a lot to go through, but it sounds like things are looking up.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Yes, things have finally turned around. I appreciate your prayers. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
"barbara," you follow good fiction qualities in this chapter. It has good characterization (stresses emotions, descriptions, and appropriate narration.) I'm caught up in the story action.
But I think it ends too abruptly. Perhaps I missed a stitch regarding the computer duty. Perhaps that's the suspense of what seh will find there. If so, that accounts for the sudden ending.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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"barbara," you follow good fiction qualities in this chapter. It has good characterization (stresses emotions, descriptions, and appropriate narration.) I'm caught up in the story action.
But I think it ends too abruptly. Perhaps I missed a stitch regarding the computer duty. Perhaps that's the suspense of what seh will find there. If so, that accounts for the sudden ending.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I thought about postint the part three with this but it would have ending up being around 2400 words. I will post part three as soon as I have enough pumps. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lola29
This was a great read, and I'm glad Roy's dispicable actions were revealed, and I hope he is removed from office. What I can't understand is why Sara would think Joe would hurt her or Cassie.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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This was a great read, and I'm glad Roy's dispicable actions were revealed, and I hope he is removed from office. What I can't understand is why Sara would think Joe would hurt her or Cassie.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from KayteeF
I like this very action packed chapter. Well written, the wrongdoer is finally getting his 'come uppance'. Joe and Matt seem to be part of that special group of gentlemen, which is more than can be said about the 'sheriff's posse'.
I like adventure stories like this. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
No hurry, just make sure you are feeling well enough first.
Cathleen
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I like this very action packed chapter. Well written, the wrongdoer is finally getting his 'come uppance'. Joe and Matt seem to be part of that special group of gentlemen, which is more than can be said about the 'sheriff's posse'.
I like adventure stories like this. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
No hurry, just make sure you are feeling well enough first.
Cathleen
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you like the action.
Comment from Arkine
See, this wouldn't have bothered me, then again, I would have castrated Roy a long time ago. ~L~ But that's just me. I guess Sarah is a bit more, um, mild-tempered. Good chapter! Didn't catch any nits. :)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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See, this wouldn't have bothered me, then again, I would have castrated Roy a long time ago. ~L~ But that's just me. I guess Sarah is a bit more, um, mild-tempered. Good chapter! Didn't catch any nits. :)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Cassie young and didn't understand date rape until Joe explained it awhile back.
Comment from LadyWave
I'm glad Roy got some of his due! The only suggestion I have is in this sentence -
"I'd kill any man who victimized the lady I love."
I thought 'woman' might flow better than 'lady.'
Great job as usual!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I'm glad Roy got some of his due! The only suggestion I have is in this sentence -
"I'd kill any man who victimized the lady I love."
I thought 'woman' might flow better than 'lady.'
Great job as usual!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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I wondered the same thing myself. I have changed it. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
Another good chapter easy to read and follow with no difficult or wordy sentences. Plenty of action in this one, that Mark's got some front. Still Joe gave him a much deserved what for. Te he
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Another good chapter easy to read and follow with no difficult or wordy sentences. Plenty of action in this one, that Mark's got some front. Still Joe gave him a much deserved what for. Te he
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from zoocq
OMG!! Great news!! My prayers are with you over the next few months as you undergo treatment! Thank you for the strength to keep writing...I love your work, as does all of us here.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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OMG!! Great news!! My prayers are with you over the next few months as you undergo treatment! Thank you for the strength to keep writing...I love your work, as does all of us here.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your prayers and I appreciate your kind review.