Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Great chapter, it looks like this romance is heading in the right direction, but I suspect there are some troubled waters ahead for both of them yet.
Patrick
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Hi Barbara,
Great chapter, it looks like this romance is heading in the right direction, but I suspect there are some troubled waters ahead for both of them yet.
Patrick
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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There are some storms headed towards this couple. Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from jadapenn
This was a very touching and emotional chapter, girlfriend. Your work is flowing so smoothly nowadays. I just love this patient Joe and how he handles Sara. Nothing rough about the tough guy.
Well written. Thanks too for the author's notes. All my love. jada
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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This was a very touching and emotional chapter, girlfriend. Your work is flowing so smoothly nowadays. I just love this patient Joe and how he handles Sara. Nothing rough about the tough guy.
Well written. Thanks too for the author's notes. All my love. jada
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from zoocq
From this beautiful love story I can tell you are a beautiful person. The characters are so strong and honorable as you take them through losses and redemption in their lives. I wish you well as you travel this scary road...my prayers are with you.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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From this beautiful love story I can tell you are a beautiful person. The characters are so strong and honorable as you take them through losses and redemption in their lives. I wish you well as you travel this scary road...my prayers are with you.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your prayers and continued support. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from gerry26
This is an excellent chapter. I enjoyed your scenes, and your approach to the sexual aspects of the story. I believe your characters are getting stronger and your readers are growing with them.
gerry
I hope all goes well at the doctors.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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This is an excellent chapter. I enjoyed your scenes, and your approach to the sexual aspects of the story. I believe your characters are getting stronger and your readers are growing with them.
gerry
I hope all goes well at the doctors.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Such a lovely romantic
read, Barbara - you plucky
lady you, to keep on with
your writing so you won't
disappoint all your fans.
Our thoughts and prayers are always with you, my friend.
Margaret x
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Such a lovely romantic
read, Barbara - you plucky
lady you, to keep on with
your writing so you won't
disappoint all your fans.
Our thoughts and prayers are always with you, my friend.
Margaret x
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your thoughts and prayers. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
Another great chapter. It is so nuce to hear Joe talk about people I can relate to (from the other book). It's good to hear about Leya.
Boy, Joe thinks of everything (hook and eye).
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Another great chapter. It is so nuce to hear Joe talk about people I can relate to (from the other book). It's good to hear about Leya.
Boy, Joe thinks of everything (hook and eye).
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I started writing these sequels because some fans wanted to hear how their old friends were doing.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - I got a new allotment of 6's. This one is definitely worthy. You write in such an easy to read manner, and already have me hooked on the story. As usual, the editing seems perfect, but how would I know. I just jumped in and enjoyed. Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Hi Barbara - I got a new allotment of 6's. This one is definitely worthy. You write in such an easy to read manner, and already have me hooked on the story. As usual, the editing seems perfect, but how would I know. I just jumped in and enjoyed. Regards, Bill
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support. It's always good to hear from you. You brighten my day.
Comment from Ponder
Hi Barbara,
As usual, this chapter is excellently written, the dialogue is impressive and the story is moving along very nicely, Joe and Sara's character's are nicely drawn here - Sara's worry about the other wives and Joe's gentlemanly exit.
I'm sorry to here about your follow up appointment. I'm sure, despite this set back that everything will turn out alright in the end. I wish you well and will be thinking about you.
Jules
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Hi Barbara,
As usual, this chapter is excellently written, the dialogue is impressive and the story is moving along very nicely, Joe and Sara's character's are nicely drawn here - Sara's worry about the other wives and Joe's gentlemanly exit.
I'm sorry to here about your follow up appointment. I'm sure, despite this set back that everything will turn out alright in the end. I wish you well and will be thinking about you.
Jules
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your thoughts. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from RKagan
The relationship between Sara and Joe is coming along beautifully. Your writing is always clear and an easy read. I read your authors notes and I want to say, God Bless you and be well.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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The relationship between Sara and Joe is coming along beautifully. Your writing is always clear and an easy read. I read your authors notes and I want to say, God Bless you and be well.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your well wishes and I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
I'm so sorry. I hope you get it all and you will be okay. What would we do without you?
AS for your story, As I read about Joe, I'm thinking he's like every woman's perfect man. Maybe a little too perfect. He needs something to make him a little less like prince charming. Some flaws. That's just my opinion. Other than that, it's a really good chapter.
hugs book
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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I'm so sorry. I hope you get it all and you will be okay. What would we do without you?
AS for your story, As I read about Joe, I'm thinking he's like every woman's perfect man. Maybe a little too perfect. He needs something to make him a little less like prince charming. Some flaws. That's just my opinion. Other than that, it's a really good chapter.
hugs book
Comment Written 09-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2010
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Joe is not perfect and his imperfections will be revealed shortly. Thank you for your review. I appreciate your well wishes.