Still
Beyond The Reach Of Time45 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a sweet and heartfelt tribute (I think) to your late sister. And you completely capture the sense of nature's continuity against the personal sorrow that refuses to diminish. Beautifully structured, metered and rhymed, this is a virtual six from me. Thanks for sharing, Jess. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is such a sweet and heartfelt tribute (I think) to your late sister. And you completely capture the sense of nature's continuity against the personal sorrow that refuses to diminish. Beautifully structured, metered and rhymed, this is a virtual six from me. Thanks for sharing, Jess. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend. That truly means the world!
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from Mintybee
This is beautiful and tragic. The sorrow and the love are touching. Your form flows smoothly, and the emotions are complex. The title sums up the poem perfectly.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is beautiful and tragic. The sorrow and the love are touching. Your form flows smoothly, and the emotions are complex. The title sums up the poem perfectly.
Mintybee
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you, my friend. That means so much to me.
xo
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautifully crafted poem and it really tells the lasting effects of both love and grief. Two subjects very difficult to put into words at times but you did it here. Thanks for sharing your work. Good job.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A beautifully crafted poem and it really tells the lasting effects of both love and grief. Two subjects very difficult to put into words at times but you did it here. Thanks for sharing your work. Good job.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn, that truly means a lot!
Xo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Simply beautiful, Jess.
And so incredibly moving.
Tomorrow marks the 101st anniversary of my mother's birth: February 27, 1923.
So many of your lines are evocative of her; how I dearly miss her...
Thank you ever so much for sharing this beautiful tribute...
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Simply beautiful, Jess.
And so incredibly moving.
Tomorrow marks the 101st anniversary of my mother's birth: February 27, 1923.
So many of your lines are evocative of her; how I dearly miss her...
Thank you ever so much for sharing this beautiful tribute...
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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diane, I am so touched by your words, and honored by your review. It means the world. Thank you for your kindness and empathy, though I am so sorry you can relate.
Much love,
Jess
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely, happy belated birthday poem that you have written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It is very well written, and the rhyming is great. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is a lovely, happy belated birthday poem that you have written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It is very well written, and the rhyming is great. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Patricia, thank you so much! Xoxk