Tributes
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Comment from Ricky1024
I always believe that. Very rarely do you get a real friend.
A real friend that will sacrifice no matter what!
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
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I always believe that. Very rarely do you get a real friend.
A real friend that will sacrifice no matter what!
...
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
What a lovely and gorgeous ode to your friend. A fine declaration of friendship and love for one other! An excellent write! If I might make one suggestions perhaps turn up the font just a bit on your text so that the older people can read it easier. Having said that it takes nothing away from the beauty of your poem and the intent behind it. It's a wonderful and a good thing to have such a close friend for which I congratulate you! I see no aesthetic issues or any grammar spelling sentence structure issues at all. This phone looks very well done by a crafted and talented hand. Thank you for your submission. I look forward to next one have a great day.!
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What a lovely and gorgeous ode to your friend. A fine declaration of friendship and love for one other! An excellent write! If I might make one suggestions perhaps turn up the font just a bit on your text so that the older people can read it easier. Having said that it takes nothing away from the beauty of your poem and the intent behind it. It's a wonderful and a good thing to have such a close friend for which I congratulate you! I see no aesthetic issues or any grammar spelling sentence structure issues at all. This phone looks very well done by a crafted and talented hand. Thank you for your submission. I look forward to next one have a great day.!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
Comment from jmdg1954
Oh, you little devil. That last line... Besides, I need to keep you near, 'cause you know way too much
To meet someone, develop a friendship and it lasts a lifetime! It doesn't get much better than that!
Debi, this is a great tribute to your dearest friend. Very thoughtful and thanks for sharing.
John
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Oh, you little devil. That last line... Besides, I need to keep you near, 'cause you know way too much
To meet someone, develop a friendship and it lasts a lifetime! It doesn't get much better than that!
Debi, this is a great tribute to your dearest friend. Very thoughtful and thanks for sharing.
John
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A very happy poem celebrating a wonderful friendship with a nice touch of humour in the last line. The picture is delightful and echoes the happy
spirit of the text!
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A very happy poem celebrating a wonderful friendship with a nice touch of humour in the last line. The picture is delightful and echoes the happy
spirit of the text!
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
Comment from Wendy G
A wonderful tribute to your friend, and congratulations on such an enduring and enriching friendship.yes, let each generation keep it going - that would be wonderful. Very nicely written.
Wendy
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A wonderful tribute to your friend, and congratulations on such an enduring and enriching friendship.yes, let each generation keep it going - that would be wonderful. Very nicely written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2023