Santa's Christmas Carol
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had so much fun reading this contest entry. Thank you for sharing it with us. While living in Germany, my husband was active Army, I noticed the German and Austrian toy makers did a wonderful job crafting the toys. Just a side note. Anyway, good luck with the contest.
"John, In the future, Jessica will become Mrs. Claus." (lower case 'i' on 'in')
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I had so much fun reading this contest entry. Thank you for sharing it with us. While living in Germany, my husband was active Army, I noticed the German and Austrian toy makers did a wonderful job crafting the toys. Just a side note. Anyway, good luck with the contest.
"John, In the future, Jessica will become Mrs. Claus." (lower case 'i' on 'in')
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Barbara, thank you for the review and catching the typo. Terry.
Comment from royowen
Now, I like this story of Christmas, and how the myth, or in this case, the "fact" of the beginning, ever since I sight my father sneaking into my bedroom as a young boy with a sack full of toys, I have despised the creation of Santa, beautifully written Terry, good luck, blessings Roy (this proves you're addicted to writing)
Typo : It turned out they could (crave) carve? 2 : Your old toy shop and bank account have been given (to) the Hanover home fo boys.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Now, I like this story of Christmas, and how the myth, or in this case, the "fact" of the beginning, ever since I sight my father sneaking into my bedroom as a young boy with a sack full of toys, I have despised the creation of Santa, beautifully written Terry, good luck, blessings Roy (this proves you're addicted to writing)
Typo : It turned out they could (crave) carve? 2 : Your old toy shop and bank account have been given (to) the Hanover home fo boys.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Roy, thank you for the review and for catching the typos, Terry.
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A pleasure