Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Metamorphose"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
There are bad haiku's, good haiku's and marvelous haiku's. This one with the accompanying picture does it for me. Very good, and best of luck in the challenge.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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There are bad haiku's, good haiku's and marvelous haiku's. This one with the accompanying picture does it for me. Very good, and best of luck in the challenge.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Carlos' girl
I found the first line about six feet to be confusing. Is the person six feet tall? Or buried and six feet under? Either way i guess then he gets wings? Is he a caterpillar turned butterfly? Help.
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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I found the first line about six feet to be confusing. Is the person six feet tall? Or buried and six feet under? Either way i guess then he gets wings? Is he a caterpillar turned butterfly? Help.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2022
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Yes, the caterpillar, with six legs, morphs into a two wing butterfly every time.
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Ok. Got it. Thank u