Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86

Good

I like the concept, as well as the subject matter. Nevertheless, I felt that you were cheating your sentences, into being incomplete sentences...in order to keep within the limits of having a 120 words. Keep Writing

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

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Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

This is a wonderful entry to the contest. You've followed the guidelines perfectly and your words show that. You are a talented spiritual writer. I enjoy your work, and I wish you much success with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

Comment from lancellot

Good

benediction for a day, and whispering him, {'want} anything {once'.}

- edit this.

today", he prayed.
-edit punctuation.

the World News @9pm on television read the Live War

- not a proper sentence

'God, you are good', he uttered.

- edit punctuation.


Why didn't he just wish for all wars to end?

Some editing is required, with focus on sentence structure.

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Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

What I get from this poem is that we must have faith. Faith in God. And those who believe in God have faith the Lord will follow and watch over them. This is a great tribute to God. Thank you.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

I enjoyed your wee story. You did a nice job with the very detailed prompt. The photo is effective and sets the tone immediately. I think the red text works well,

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