Poppy and Odi's Mission
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Poppy and Odi's Mission THE END"A Cube 16 Poem Book
65 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
What a fun romp for children, who will eat this up (especially the mermaids) which the girls will love. You have a fantastic imagination Sandra, and I'm so glad you're willing to share your gift to help educate and entertain our children. There's just the right number of illustrations, and with the additional coloring figures, the kids will love it...I know I did.
Linda
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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What a fun romp for children, who will eat this up (especially the mermaids) which the girls will love. You have a fantastic imagination Sandra, and I'm so glad you're willing to share your gift to help educate and entertain our children. There's just the right number of illustrations, and with the additional coloring figures, the kids will love it...I know I did.
Linda
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Linda! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Now to get the colouring pictures added and get it published! Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from alexisleech
What a wonderful ending to a fantastic poetic tale. I will be forever grateful for this beautiful poem book you've created for my grandchildren, and wouldn't doubt other grandparents would love you to do the same for them. The end result is priceless.
Thank you, my dear friend - see you next week!
Alexis xxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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What a wonderful ending to a fantastic poetic tale. I will be forever grateful for this beautiful poem book you've created for my grandchildren, and wouldn't doubt other grandparents would love you to do the same for them. The end result is priceless.
Thank you, my dear friend - see you next week!
Alexis xxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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I'm so very pleased you like what I've written for Poppy and Odi, Alexis. I'll have it ready for you for when you come home again. It's been my pleasure to write this for you, let's hope the children like it, too. Chat later, and see you on Wednesday! Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
What an excellent kid's story Sandra, yes indeed, it would be great if you would publish this, it would be a fun story, and also quite educational, with the sea whip person as a point of reference, excellent rhyming, wonderful drawing etc. would you consider doing a little drawing for me? Well done my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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What an excellent kid's story Sandra, yes indeed, it would be great if you would publish this, it would be a fun story, and also quite educational, with the sea whip person as a point of reference, excellent rhyming, wonderful drawing etc. would you consider doing a little drawing for me? Well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Roy! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. I can't draw a stick man properly, let alone these. But you should look on Pixabay.com. They have some amazing spiritual pictures, illustrations, that would be perfect for your poems, and you can use them to illustrate your book when you do it. They are free to use commercially as well. I've even managed to get the perfect background for my book covers. How are you doing with getting your book up? I can't remember if we are friends on Facebook, if we're not, we can rectify that and then we can 'face' each other on 'Messenger' and I can talk you through it free. A telephone call would cost the earth.
Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
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Thanks Sandra, I don?t know if we?re friends or not, I?ve more or less got enough for two books, I?ve got something like 4,000 in reserve, I?ve got to just do a final edit on them, I was talking more of doing some kid?s Christian songs, that I?ve written with cartoon characters to illustrate, but sheer lack of confidence is my enemy. Bless you Sandra I?m on face time,
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It's not that hard. When you are almost ready we'll try to come on messenger together, is that what you normally use? I'll go and check to see if we are friends. (Well, we are, but in a different way!! Lol) xx
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I can use messenger?I think heh heh.
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I've just found you on FB, and sent you a message on Messenger. We can now chat face to face while I talk you through publishing. I have a friend here until Sunday evening, so we could try this out next week if that's ok? xxx
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Ok Sandra, do you have FaceTime?
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Yes, on Messenger and Skype, we'll be able to see each other. Now you will know what I look like!! Lol Please look past the wrinkes. :))
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I?ll forgive yours if you forgive mine heh heh.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Sandra.
This is another outstanding part of your story describing the unfortunate tooth. You use the CUBE16 style perfectly in your writing. Again, adding enjambment to the style adds to the dimension of the story.
This is great and thank you for the attribution.
Robert
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Hi Sandra.
This is another outstanding part of your story describing the unfortunate tooth. You use the CUBE16 style perfectly in your writing. Again, adding enjambment to the style adds to the dimension of the story.
This is great and thank you for the attribution.
Robert
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Robert, for this really lovely review and the sixth golden star! I'm over the moon you like what I've written in your amazing Cube 16 format, it's one I'll be using many times for young children's poem stories. The lines are short enough for them to read and hopefully memorise. Thank you so very much for bringing this wonderful form to us, you will again be mentioned in my acknowlegments when it's published. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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Hi Sandra. You are very welcome.
Robert
Comment from Jay Squires
I just can't get over your ease and charm in writing ... in rhymed verse, mind you, such a delightful, suspenseful, children's story. Your granddaughter must be pleased as can be that her grandmum can write so well. As with all things, of course, this book must come to an end. As with your other successes, I trust you will get it published!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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I just can't get over your ease and charm in writing ... in rhymed verse, mind you, such a delightful, suspenseful, children's story. Your granddaughter must be pleased as can be that her grandmum can write so well. As with all things, of course, this book must come to an end. As with your other successes, I trust you will get it published!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Hi Jay, thank you so much for this lovely review and for that beautiful gold star award!! I'll have to write a little true story about my grandson and what he did with his book, it's so funny. Thank you for all the support you've given me throughout all my writing, you have been amazing, my friend. Yes, it will be published! Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from amahra
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful kid's story. The artwork was fun and the poem style you chose was awesome and musical to the ear. Kids, heck--I enjoyed it myself. LOL! God's blessings with the book.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful kid's story. The artwork was fun and the poem style you chose was awesome and musical to the ear. Kids, heck--I enjoyed it myself. LOL! God's blessings with the book.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Aw, thank you, Amahra, for this great review. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it because I think there will be some grandmothers reading this to their grandchildren. (The grandmother for whose grandchildren I've written this for, for one.) Thank you for that golden sixth star, my friend, that was so very kind of you!! Warm hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from blondie560
What a wonderful story of cooperation, Sandra! Your friend's grandchildren should love it. I'll bet their friends will too. I hope the sea whip is okay! I wonder what you'll write next? Hope your week is lovely. Hugs :) Sally
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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What a wonderful story of cooperation, Sandra! Your friend's grandchildren should love it. I'll bet their friends will too. I hope the sea whip is okay! I wonder what you'll write next? Hope your week is lovely. Hugs :) Sally
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Hi, Sally, thank you so much for this really lovely review and the golden sixth star just shone so brightly over it! The Sea Whip is quite a strong animal. I didn't know they existed until I Googled to see if there was anything in the oceans that looked like string, and up popped this little fellow. Lol. Perfect.
What will I write next? I've had another novel screaming in my head for some time now, so after I've finished getting Betrayal and this book done, I'll be writing that one. It will be taking our heroine back in time.... Thanks again, my dear friend. Warm hugs! :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic idea, Sandra, of having a coloring book for Poppy and Odi's adventure. It was very well done and greatly enjoyed. I liked how everyone came together to remove the tooth and how everyone became forever friends. Great job. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This was a fantastic idea, Sandra, of having a coloring book for Poppy and Odi's adventure. It was very well done and greatly enjoyed. I liked how everyone came together to remove the tooth and how everyone became forever friends. Great job. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Alie, you have made my day! What a lovely review, and the six stars are incredibly enjoyed! I'm glad you like the colouring book idea. I did that with Scout and her Magical Unicorn and I've seen children colouring in the pictures. So nice when that happens. Thank you, my friend, for being so kind. Warm hugs. Sandra xxxx
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You are so very welcome, Sandra. That's the key isn't it, having the children enjoy it. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Wow, it took a whole ocean of friends to get rid of that tooth!! Just delightful all the way through. You are a premier storyteller and children will love this little book. Who has not had a toothache? Excellent work on this!!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Wow, it took a whole ocean of friends to get rid of that tooth!! Just delightful all the way through. You are a premier storyteller and children will love this little book. Who has not had a toothache? Excellent work on this!!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Sherry, and the nice compliment! I'm delighted you enjoyed reading my little story. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxx
Comment from Sally Law
Hooray! Many hands and willing friends are sure to help. This is more than six worthy, a masterpiece, I think. Brava, dear Sandra!
Sending you my best today as always and plenty of starfish applause*******************************!!
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Hooray! Many hands and willing friends are sure to help. This is more than six worthy, a masterpiece, I think. Brava, dear Sandra!
Sending you my best today as always and plenty of starfish applause*******************************!!
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Aww, Sally, thank you so much! What a lovely review, I hope all the children will like it, too. And thank you humongously for the sixth gold star, and the starfish applause!!! LOL!! Loved that. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx