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Og and Ugg

The First Valentine's Day

38 total reviews 
Comment from juliaSjames
Exceptional
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Dear Sally

I love this story. I love the way you incorporate messages so gently and effectively for today's acquisitive society.

"Ugg already has everything: warm cave, many dogs, the heavens above and the earth below. What more does a she-creature need?"

I love his carefully chosen gifts. Do you know these are what my grandkids bring home for me? Pretty pebbles from the road. Bright leaves and wildflowers.

Beautifully written, dear one.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much formtje locelymreciew of my sillest love story ever. I'm so glad you enjoyed my off the cave wall offering. You will see Og and Ugg again. I am always so touched and thankful for your outstanding marks. I'll keep your kind words in my heart.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by juliaSjames on 30-Jan-2020
    You're welcome Sally
Comment from MamaBebop
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Sally,
Oh such pure amore!!
I think this is a lovely Valentine Day story.
This short piece is well told and I can see it being a perfect little Childrens story. I think my girls would love it.
Very nicely done. The artwork is the perfect match as well.
In our house, we call the dandelions flowers, and when they turn white they are "fuzzies."
Blessings, Beth

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    I am so glad you enjoyed this silly love story. I will have a sequel and hope you'll stay tuned. Sending you my best today as always, dear Beth,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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awwwwwwweeeee! this is so heart-warming! what a great idea to write about the caveman and his encounter with love! Geez, you make it hard when I'm out of 6's! But I'm sure you will post more so I can give to you on Sunday! Big bright shiny virtual 6 for this though, so precious!! xoxo

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and virtual six. I'm glad you enjoyed Og and Ugg. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxoxo
reply by Diana L Crawford on 31-Jan-2020
    Really is very cute! A pleasure to enjoy! Happy weekend! xoxo
Comment from Pantygynt
Exceptional
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This was great fun and so well done. There was so little tell and almost 100 % show which is how we are told it should be done these days. Also I found only one adverb, carefully, in this and they are supposed to be dirty words nowadays, or so I have been told

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much for the outstanding review and generous stars, Jim. I appreciate your kind review of my work. I don't think carefully is a bad word, especially where love is concerned. ;)
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
reply by Pantygynt on 29-Jan-2020
    And you are probably right at that.
Comment from JudyE
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Our dandelions are slightly different to the British ones. Not sure about those in the Americas.

Just one spag:
They sat together hand-in-hand for hours, blowing on on the dandelions to watch them swirl in the air. - 'on' is repeated.

Have a great day
Judy

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and critique. It is always so appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a lovely Valentine's story.
This short piece is well told and believable.
Very nicely done. The artwork is the perfect match as well.
Lucky Og and Ugg.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Og and Ugg are blessed. They be back. So glad you like.
    Sending best from the land of Uz.
    Sal xo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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LOL I loved it, and it makes for a great Valentine's Day story. It had to begin somewhere, right? NO problems noted and as for the dandelion, it is both but for the native Canadians, it is food and a source of wine. The tops before they turn can be breaded and deep fried, the stems and leaves aare greens to eat, the root makes tea and wine.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
    Thank so much for the wonderful review of Og and Ugg. So glad you enjoyed this simpler time.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Sally, a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this review finds you in good health and spirit. Thank you for sharing your Valentine's day story with us. I enjoyed your "primitive" take on this romantic day. Good job and have a good day.

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear poet. I'm glad you enjoyed Og and Ugg. I appreciate the excellent review and kind comments.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :))