The Minx and the Mensch
Satisfying a need38 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
OMGsh, this is just too funny. So maybe they need to put the shutters back up? Ha ha ha. Very cute and the photo goes well with it too. The best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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OMGsh, this is just too funny. So maybe they need to put the shutters back up? Ha ha ha. Very cute and the photo goes well with it too. The best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you, moongirlwriter!! I think they wanted to be voyeurs but then realized it wasn't such a good pastime after all!!
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:) then they become peeping toms, ha ha ha ha
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Yep!!!
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Comment from L. A. Stanley
I really like this. The tension was building from your words! Bars on the ending, which I LOVED ( made me laugh) I didn't see how the verse about someone seeing them would be horrified. Maybe I missed something. The rest was good, and the end was great. Funny!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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I really like this. The tension was building from your words! Bars on the ending, which I LOVED ( made me laugh) I didn't see how the verse about someone seeing them would be horrified. Maybe I missed something. The rest was good, and the end was great. Funny!
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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They were in their bedroom, removing a shudder so they could spy on their neighbors. Some people might be horrified being caught in that act!!!
Comment from OneKnouff
You really had me going here. I was hooked from the beginning. I enjoyed the ride and was paid off at the end. What fun! The photo enhances the finale. Thanks for sharing this one.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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You really had me going here. I was hooked from the beginning. I enjoyed the ride and was paid off at the end. What fun! The photo enhances the finale. Thanks for sharing this one.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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You're welcome!! Glad to hear I left you feeling satisfied!!
Comment from Kamisah Karim
This is a very interesting poem indeed.You made my mind wander to many possibilities for a moment, may be two.
I love the element of surprise and the best one in the end about their neighbours.Now, my mind starts to wander again....Good job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This is a very interesting poem indeed.You made my mind wander to many possibilities for a moment, may be two.
I love the element of surprise and the best one in the end about their neighbours.Now, my mind starts to wander again....Good job.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Oh dear, I've been a Minx here. Bad, bad me!!
Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem has a good example of expressive, normal, casual, witty stand of carnal capering between Minx and Mensch; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This poem has a good example of expressive, normal, casual, witty stand of carnal capering between Minx and Mensch; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from 24chas
Such a naughty writer, mystery author. I feel like I was watching a Three's Company episode. :) And I mean that in a good way. This was really funny and I won't go into what I was thinking. I shudder (:)) to think what that would reveal about me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Such a naughty writer, mystery author. I feel like I was watching a Three's Company episode. :) And I mean that in a good way. This was really funny and I won't go into what I was thinking. I shudder (:)) to think what that would reveal about me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Oh, I see: you let others get metaphorically naked , and you just observe. I don't know; I think your poetry suggests otherwise, 24chas. Nice try, though...
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Comment from LisaMay
Satisfying a need indeed! So they could spy on their neighbours. Did those shutters not work because that gingerbread pussy, Randall, had been swinging on them?
Such a CLEAN poem, but oh so highly suggestive.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Satisfying a need indeed! So they could spy on their neighbours. Did those shutters not work because that gingerbread pussy, Randall, had been swinging on them?
Such a CLEAN poem, but oh so highly suggestive.
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Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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I let YOUR imagination do all the, um, hard work...and I see it could be trusted with that assignment!!
Comment from Beri Bee
This is a most EXCELLENT entry to Carnal Caperings! It's tantalizing and ultimately humorous and relatable! It is quite a caper! Well done! Best of luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This is a most EXCELLENT entry to Carnal Caperings! It's tantalizing and ultimately humorous and relatable! It is quite a caper! Well done! Best of luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you, Beri!! I'm so glad it satisfied you!!!