Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was brilliant, Yvonne! The bridge you chose does your words justice, it's got that sense of the unknown in it. The mist, those who have crossed it, haven't come back... Now that was spooky! Your free verse words do have a rhythmical beat to them, and it was so well written. I've not written any but this one was a real pleasure to read. Well done, you met the challenge and some! :)) Sandra xxx

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

What a wonderful review! Thank you so much. I'm happy you liked it and enjoyed reading it.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Your bridge is a very clever metaphor. I have enjoyed reading this poem.
BTW, who is in charge of The Free Verse Club now? Wasn't this Mike's club?
Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019

The Fabulous Free Verse Club fell to me. I volunteered to manage it until Michael returned. Not that he's gone, I kinda got stuck with it. 8-)

Thank you for reviewing.