The Seven-Tined Stag
An Acrostic poem for the contest34 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
Pardon my ignorance and if it wasn't for your wonderful notes, I'd have not grasp this beautiful tale, so thank you for sharing this superb acrostic and good luck!
P.S: If I may suggest, would be nice to change the font of each beginning letter with bold letters, just a thought my friend. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Pardon my ignorance and if it wasn't for your wonderful notes, I'd have not grasp this beautiful tale, so thank you for sharing this superb acrostic and good luck!
P.S: If I may suggest, would be nice to change the font of each beginning letter with bold letters, just a thought my friend. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your review and advice, Ameen. I have considered this in the past but on the whole prefer not to have the form of the poem dominating the content. Happy Easter to you! Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Artasylum
This is a compelling piece... I hope the seven-tined stag will remain safe away from hunters guns and human carnage. love your point of view and imagery in this. yours, diana
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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This is a compelling piece... I hope the seven-tined stag will remain safe away from hunters guns and human carnage. love your point of view and imagery in this. yours, diana
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Very many thanks for your review, Atrasylum. Much appreciated. Best wishes for a happy Easter, Tony
Comment from Swampfox1
I would recommend that you bold the beginning letters of every word in the poem being that this is an Acrostic poem. You have the beginning words all Capitalized but that is not quite enough to make the vertical words stand out. The poem is good, it flows well and it reads like a story which is good. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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I would recommend that you bold the beginning letters of every word in the poem being that this is an Acrostic poem. You have the beginning words all Capitalized but that is not quite enough to make the vertical words stand out. The poem is good, it flows well and it reads like a story which is good. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your review and advice, Swampfox. I have considered this in the past but on the whole prefer not to have the form of the poem dominating the content. Happy Easter to you! Best wishes, Tony
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You're welcome. NO problem.
Comment from karenina
Interesting acrostic! Mystical and eerie and a week bit of a cautionary tale...thank you for fleshing it out with the inspiration that led you to write it.... Song of Amergin eh? I'll have to google that and copy it for my (very Irish) husband!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Interesting acrostic! Mystical and eerie and a week bit of a cautionary tale...thank you for fleshing it out with the inspiration that led you to write it.... Song of Amergin eh? I'll have to google that and copy it for my (very Irish) husband!
Karenina
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Karenina, and a very happy Easter to you! Best wishes, Tony
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Same to you! Watch out for purple bunnies (or put down the Jameson!)---Karenina