Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Jason sounds like a wonderful person who would want you to have a great life. I believe you'll see him again when the time is right. For now I'm sure he wants you to be happy.

 Comment Written 30-May-2017

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reply by the author on 30-May-2017

Thanks Cindy.
Jason's come around once in a lifetime.
Appreciate yours.
Ricky
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written song/poem to let your son know you miss him and wish to meet him soon. But he let you know here is still work on earth you need to do.

One typo picked up.
"But dad, there's still to(too) much work that must be done."

 Comment Written 30-May-2017

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reply by the author on 30-May-2017

Thank you.
Jason's come around once in a lifetime.
Love yours.
Ricky
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A meloncholy write and I am so sorry for your loss, I can't imagine what you are going through, your write is a tribute to someone who thought about donating his organs before he died, although your words are very sad I'm glad you shared them with us, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-May-2017

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reply by the author on 30-May-2017

Hi Dolly and thanks for helping this with your review.
Jason was only eighteen and eighteen year olsds dont think of death and donating.
That sometimes falls on family.
Thank God we had the ciurage and like the name of Jasons band He had started "Three Ways To Save"Three out odf four got a second chance at life.
Ricky
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Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Wow, these song lyrics gave me the chills while reading it, especially knowing the inspiration behind the write.

The repetition of the I's lend itself to impact and intensity.

I would love to hear these lyrics to music.

My condolence on the loss of your son. He seemed to be a loving and giving person.

 Comment Written 30-May-2017

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reply by the author on 30-May-2017

Thanks Poetic Friend.
Sometimes we write something that is special....
Flows well and is touchibg.
Ricky
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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very sweet, sad and well written poem about the death of your precious Jay. You used very good wording and his sweet little picture. Bless you my friend. Teri

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 Comment Written 29-May-2017

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Thanks Teri its already listed as a six and Im pumping it.
Ricky...

Comment from johnwilson

Exceptional

Quite simply, this is awe inspiring. Hackles are on my arms after reading it. Such a simple piece, yet so profoundly sad and filled with hope at the same time. I love the way the poem is set out on the page.

 Comment Written 29-May-2017

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Thanks for your support.
Im teying to oumo it up for more reviews
Ricky
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is lyrically lovely and haunting in its content. Your pain and loss shine through from beginning to end. Thank you so much for sharing it.

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 Comment Written 29-May-2017

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reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Rhis I could sing in a group with bo orovlem just just a backup band.
Rixkt
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