Moondream
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Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, Luna, we are all "changed by the Gifts of a Dream." I love your surreal, dreamlike images that reminded me of the cartoon strip "Little Nemo in Slumberland." Your poem offers an enchanting vision, as if a child gazed upon the clouds and imagined shapes. You also make a creative use of metaphor to describe inspiration. We can all open that door and access her. Thank you for sharing. I wish you another year of inspiring writing.
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Yes, Luna, we are all "changed by the Gifts of a Dream." I love your surreal, dreamlike images that reminded me of the cartoon strip "Little Nemo in Slumberland." Your poem offers an enchanting vision, as if a child gazed upon the clouds and imagined shapes. You also make a creative use of metaphor to describe inspiration. We can all open that door and access her. Thank you for sharing. I wish you another year of inspiring writing.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
Comment from winnona
beautifully written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The words form a magical image in my mind as I read the piece. I wish I could go to that place and stay for awhile.
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beautifully written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. The words form a magical image in my mind as I read the piece. I wish I could go to that place and stay for awhile.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
Comment from rjuselius
i absolutely love anything mythical and what i love more is a great piece of mythical elements which you so plentifully and delightfully describe!
thank you for sharing!
virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x
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i absolutely love anything mythical and what i love more is a great piece of mythical elements which you so plentifully and delightfully describe!
thank you for sharing!
virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
Comment from lancellot
This is very good, and you do a good job painting a fantastic world where dreams are reality. I like the presentation and the underlining message from you met on this journey. It does fit with the Christmas theme.
Well done
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This is very good, and you do a good job painting a fantastic world where dreams are reality. I like the presentation and the underlining message from you met on this journey. It does fit with the Christmas theme.
Well done
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. The most important lessons we can learn is to forgive easily, never judge others, and love everyone equally.
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A very well-written poem. The most important lessons we can learn is to forgive easily, never judge others, and love everyone equally.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The descriptions you used and the words of fantacy and pure delight, really made this is joy to read and imaging the trip with you was easy with the great writing. I am priveledged to read a fantastic piece of work
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The descriptions you used and the words of fantacy and pure delight, really made this is joy to read and imaging the trip with you was easy with the great writing. I am priveledged to read a fantastic piece of work
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2016