Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

Very different take on this contest and I like it. You chose not to be arrogant and declare that in your title. Maybe sailing just keeps you humble. I enjoyed it. Judy

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you so much. Yes, the ocean and sailing it does make you humble. All best.

Comment from persevere

Excellent

Your acrostic sends a clear message. It doesn't pay to be arrogant at sea. What a fitting picture to illustrate your well written poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thank you very much. All the best.

Comment from Stephanie Kastner

Excellent

An arrogant sailor can get himself in trouble. I like the line, "Never tempt Neptune." It's like tempting fate. Out in the sea, I think I'd rather error with caution. One should always be prepared. Nice photo!

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 Comment Written 03-May-2016

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reply by the author on 05-May-2016

Thanks very much. Much appreciated.