The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 109 "Haiku (lacy white diamonds)"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Neonewman
I find the artwork to be magical and it definitely compliments this masterfully-crafted piece you have delivered into this contest. Good luck and God bless!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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I find the artwork to be magical and it definitely compliments this masterfully-crafted piece you have delivered into this contest. Good luck and God bless!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thanks as usual for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Curly Girly
The intricacies of Haiku poetry drive me nuts, but your verse is a delight. Great image choice too -- just perfect...
lacy white diamonds
whirl sparkling to the earth
winters snow gems
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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The intricacies of Haiku poetry drive me nuts, but your verse is a delight. Great image choice too -- just perfect...
lacy white diamonds
whirl sparkling to the earth
winters snow gems
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thanks Nicole for this enthusiastic review. So glad you enjoyed the Haiku. There are lots of rules and no-no's in this style, which I don't profess to know a lot about. I do love writing them however. Have a great day, it is spring there right? We are heading into winter. :-) Carolyn
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Yes, it's spring here!
Comment from Cajungirl
Exceptional job Carolyn. This is simply beautiful. Lady white diamonds seem to describe beautiful falling snow so perfectly. Best of luck in the contest.
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Exceptional job Carolyn. This is simply beautiful. Lady white diamonds seem to describe beautiful falling snow so perfectly. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thanks V, and what an honor you have awarded me. So glad you liked the Haiku. :-) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, notesandmore, excellent imagery presented, love the last line--should be winter's instead of winters. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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this is an excellent write, notesandmore, excellent imagery presented, love the last line--should be winter's instead of winters. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Fixed it. :-) , Thanks for the wonderful review. Glad you liked the Haiku. :-) Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
Lacy white diamonds, indeed that's a very nice expressed Haiku poem, Good luck at the contest.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,lakepoert,
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Lacy white diamonds, indeed that's a very nice expressed Haiku poem, Good luck at the contest.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,lakepoert,
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the good wishes E. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
:-) Carolyn
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you are welcome,Hugs!lakeport.