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The Flower

Don't make pormises...

31 total reviews 
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent
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my swollen and throbbing click - clit
You certainly convey the mutual joy the feel in discovering the full range of their sexuality. You also convey well her fears and his sensitive reaction to them. Definitely a scene that combines passionate lust and thoughtful love.
Brooke

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
    Thank you very much, Brooke.