Comment from
adewpearl
my swollen and throbbing click - clit
You certainly convey the mutual joy the feel in discovering the full range of their sexuality. You also convey well her fears and his sensitive reaction to them. Definitely a scene that combines passionate lust and thoughtful love.
Brooke
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
Thank you very much, Brooke.