Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Well, I have no sixes, but this is excellent work. The plots and sub plots, the conspiracies, they flow as if watching a good movie. So many things happening, so many thoughts and movement to contend with. Even the involvement of the FBI and thoughts surrounding the conspiracies behind them tells you the writer is of a class that needs no introduction.
Simply brilliant.
Best wishes, Bev.
Have a great day.
RGstar

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

Thanks so much, RG. I go through my sixes by mid-day on Sunday usually, so I know what you mean. Your review is so generous, and I much appreciate the good will and encouragement it expresses. Warmest regards, Bev

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Bev - oh boy Rick is not the good guy for sure - this has great impact and has the wheels in my brain working out what is going on here.
At least Jane can count on her self and Father. Great writing and as always you have be caught up till the end.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

Thanks so very much, Maureen. Rick has reasons, which will become apparent later, but the damage to his career and the department will not be reparable. I really appreciate you hanging with me on this novel, Maureen. Hugs, Bev

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Exceptional

Hi Writingfundimension,

I don't know how I missed the previous chapter, but read it to find the thread. Great bit of divine intervention there. Morales and Buell are, I think, playing with real fire, and I'm betting Morales is out of a job (if not his life) soon. As for Buell, well, whatever he gets he deserves.

Good chapter, and a great lead into the follow on.

Patrick

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

They are playing with fire, Patrick. Thank you for the perceptive insights, generosity and encouragement. I very much appreciate all of it. :) Bev

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Nice to read the latest chapter in this ongoing mystery. You keep me on the edge of my seat wanting more, more, more! Looking forward to the supernatural bits to kick in soon :)

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

Hi, Joy. I thank you for taking time to read and review. Much appreciate the encouragement, my friend. Supernatural course coming up! :) Bev

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This scene was full of action and there was almost a blue-on-blue situation unfolding in this sub-plot. I liked the action and the characters are acting according to their traits. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

Thanks very much, Tomes, for your generosity and support. :) Bev

reply by Tomes Johnston on 10-Jun-2014

My pleasure

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh so good. I really like this story and you are doing a great job with it.

Jana spoke into her cell phone. "Ty, I'm using an unmarked. There's been a... complication. I'll fill you in later." (95% sure you need a comma after phone; Jana is speaking)

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

Hi, Barbara. Thanks for the suggested change - I think you're right and I debated the issue myself. So glad you are enjoying the read! Warmest regards, Bev

Comment from martha france cannon

Excellent

another chapter and very good. the theme stays true. the plot still leading me. the characters are wonderful as they have been. the dialogue keeps always wanting more. you have a great narrative and keeps the story going with an easy flow for a good read.

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2014

Martha, thank you so much for this great review! I appreciate all your kind insights and your generosity. Warmest regards, Bev