A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Fear Me Not? (Free verse)"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
35 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh well written. I do think we manufacture our fears
Sometimes childhood irrationalities surface as fear. We have a kid in our preschool who is mortally afraid of band aids .its so real for him
Cool poem
Well penned and it certainly makes us think
God bless
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Oh well written. I do think we manufacture our fears
Sometimes childhood irrationalities surface as fear. We have a kid in our preschool who is mortally afraid of band aids .its so real for him
Cool poem
Well penned and it certainly makes us think
God bless
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks, kiwijenny. I'm very glad it caused you to stop and think about it, if only for a moment.
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I liked this it was very ominous and dark, I liked the wording very much, and is thought the presentation was excellent, a very enjoyable read, good luck in the competition,
Andrew
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I liked this it was very ominous and dark, I liked the wording very much, and is thought the presentation was excellent, a very enjoyable read, good luck in the competition,
Andrew
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the review, Andrew, I really appreciate it. The poem is getting it's collective behind handed to it right now in the voting. So, I will take all of the luck that I can get, my friend!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hello!
This is soooo dramatic, and soooo good! Love the artwork. It gives the finishing touch of fear as the words bounce off the page.
Truly enjoyed this six star story/poem! Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Hello!
This is soooo dramatic, and soooo good! Love the artwork. It gives the finishing touch of fear as the words bounce off the page.
Truly enjoyed this six star story/poem! Good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks, Jax, and I certainly wish more voters felt as strongly about it as you do. It's getting trounced in the competition! But, I'm glad that you liked it, at least. And by the looks of things...I'll need all the luck that I can get!
Comment from macathy
Very well written and loved the way it's portrayed on the picture.puts fear in you,as that is what it's meant to be.great the way you started each stanza with Fear me not.adds to the poem great work I think.good luck.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Very well written and loved the way it's portrayed on the picture.puts fear in you,as that is what it's meant to be.great the way you started each stanza with Fear me not.adds to the poem great work I think.good luck.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks for reading my work and sharing your thoughts with me about it, macathy. I'm truly grateful.
Comment from Chocolate Chip
I had to read this entry more than once to make sure I got what you were intending, & I believe I did. There's so much to point out when it's someone else but when we're viewing ourselves, there's so much we miss - on purpose! What if we were HONEST with ourselves, what would we think we needed to hide, if anything? Just a pondering question that came up during my reading of your very poignant poem. Good luck!
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I had to read this entry more than once to make sure I got what you were intending, & I believe I did. There's so much to point out when it's someone else but when we're viewing ourselves, there's so much we miss - on purpose! What if we were HONEST with ourselves, what would we think we needed to hide, if anything? Just a pondering question that came up during my reading of your very poignant poem. Good luck!
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I'd say you did a fine job of interpretation of my poem, Chocolate Chip. I very glad that it caused you to think, to ponder for just a moment. I appreciate your insightful, spot-on review.