Love comes in all shapes and sizes
family means love38 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
fantastic photo LOL
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like the strong end-line rhyming
good alliteration in mattered to me
a cute look at the way our values change once we make our own families :-) Brooke
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fantastic photo LOL
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like the strong end-line rhyming
good alliteration in mattered to me
a cute look at the way our values change once we make our own families :-) Brooke
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from mauial
Nice flow of thought and monorhyme with this 5-7-5 poem. Nice progression of thought from one being carefree to becoming one thinking about others instead of himself only.
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Nice flow of thought and monorhyme with this 5-7-5 poem. Nice progression of thought from one being carefree to becoming one thinking about others instead of himself only.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem has a powerful meaning to those who know the joy of a wife and child. The picture is first class and drives home the theme of one finding that family trumps freedom.
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This poem has a powerful meaning to those who know the joy of a wife and child. The picture is first class and drives home the theme of one finding that family trumps freedom.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from DonandVicki
The warmest and best love 5-7-5 that I have reviewed so far. The picture adds enhancement to your poem. A nice touch with the mathematical parody. Don
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The warmest and best love 5-7-5 that I have reviewed so far. The picture adds enhancement to your poem. A nice touch with the mathematical parody. Don
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Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Your poem flows, and reads well. I loved the last line of this poem. Well written.
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This was a well written poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Your poem flows, and reads well. I loved the last line of this poem. Well written.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a beautiful love poem in the 5-7-5 form. Your syllable count is perfect. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~
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This is a beautiful love poem in the 5-7-5 form. Your syllable count is perfect. Good luck to you in the contest.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Isn't it wonderful that what seems a complete love can still expand to include a new little blessing? This has a nice rhyme and a good message. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Isn't it wonderful that what seems a complete love can still expand to include a new little blessing? This has a nice rhyme and a good message. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment from Aaron James
A delightful 5/7/5 which offers a very honest message. I for one can equate to the feeling of young free and single when nothing matters except having a ball. Then love and marriage followed by the birth of the first child is definitely a life changer.
Excellent image to accompany too.
Aaron
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A delightful 5/7/5 which offers a very honest message. I for one can equate to the feeling of young free and single when nothing matters except having a ball. Then love and marriage followed by the birth of the first child is definitely a life changer.
Excellent image to accompany too.
Aaron
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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