Christmas Visitors come to Hedgerow
Phyllis's Penguins stay with Timmy and Tommy Mouse38 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
Way to put Ha ha ha ha with the Ho Ho Ho of Christmas...there is a typo....or shall we say typ-Ho ...cheesy....biscuits
Well done
Merry Merry Christmas
God bless
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Way to put Ha ha ha ha with the Ho Ho Ho of Christmas...there is a typo....or shall we say typ-Ho ...cheesy....biscuits
Well done
Merry Merry Christmas
God bless
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, Kiwijenny, for your lovely review! I missed that typo, lol, typHO, I spelt it right in the beginning, but sometimes I type so fast I put letters in that shouldn't be there!! Thank you again! xsx Sandra
Comment from Gungalo
Penny and Petey rolled up on the floor
Laughing like crazy, but crying... "NO MORE!
That was so bad, I think ours was the best,
Can't sing it to Phyllis ... she's got a weak chest!"
Timmy and Tommy both sat down and laughed,
"Not only that, she'll say WE'RE also daft!"
HAPPY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE
Merry Christmas girl and thanks for a great story!!!!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Penny and Petey rolled up on the floor
Laughing like crazy, but crying... "NO MORE!
That was so bad, I think ours was the best,
Can't sing it to Phyllis ... she's got a weak chest!"
Timmy and Tommy both sat down and laughed,
"Not only that, she'll say WE'RE also daft!"
HAPPY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE
Merry Christmas girl and thanks for a great story!!!!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, Gungalo, I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a brilliant, 2014! xsx Sandra.
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Smile. Thanks you.
Comment from queenv
Excellent pictures, good flow and rhythm. Great use of imagery and figurative language. You are a master story teller. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Excellent pictures, good flow and rhythm. Great use of imagery and figurative language. You are a master story teller. Great job!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much, Queenv. It was just a bit of Christmas fun, and fun writing it. I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it. :) Sandra
Comment from Treischel
A delightful Christmas story with a very cheesy version of the Twelve days of Christmas song. A nice addition to your Hedgerow series. Merry Christmas to you too!
Btw, how are the sales on you book going?
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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A delightful Christmas story with a very cheesy version of the Twelve days of Christmas song. A nice addition to your Hedgerow series. Merry Christmas to you too!
Btw, how are the sales on you book going?
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, Tom, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! My book has suddenly taken off! I put it on promotion on Kindle for a couple of days, and three days ago the sales went through the roof, (well, through a dolls house roof! LOL) I sold 35 the first day after the promotion was finished and since then it just hasn't stopped. I am going to release another book at the end of January. Thank you for being interested, Tom, that is so kind of you. Have a brilliant Christmas and a wonderful and healthy 2014. xsx
Comment from barkingdog
I read Phyllis' Christmas poem and to find this one as a response was a delightful surprise. Your rhyme is delightful and meter even.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I read Phyllis' Christmas poem and to find this one as a response was a delightful surprise. Your rhyme is delightful and meter even.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, barkingdog, I had to write it, because Phyllis told me her penguins were upset with me for not inviting them to Hedgerow for a holiday! What we have to do these days, LOL. Thank you for your wonderful review, Merry Christmas and a very happy 2014! xsx sandra
Comment from Brewster
I thought this was great for Christmas. And it seemed different from the other stories which made it more interesting. Good job and write a sequel!
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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I thought this was great for Christmas. And it seemed different from the other stories which made it more interesting. Good job and write a sequel!
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, Brewster, I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it! A sequel? I might just do that! LOL. I wish you a very Happy Christmas and a wonderful 2014! xsx Sandra
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is adorable and very skillfully-written--just the type of poetry I've come to expect from you! Great job
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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This is adorable and very skillfully-written--just the type of poetry I've come to expect from you! Great job
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, Janice, what a lovely thing to say! Thank you also for the wonderful 6 stars! I wish you and your family a wonderful Christmas and a very good 2014! xsx Sandra
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is just a brilliant piece of word whimsy! I just absolutely love the cheesy song - no pun intended. This is just flawless in form and execution and totally made my day brighter. Thank you so very much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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This is just a brilliant piece of word whimsy! I just absolutely love the cheesy song - no pun intended. This is just flawless in form and execution and totally made my day brighter. Thank you so very much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much, Mystic Angel, for your wonderful review and 6 lovely stars!! I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it. I wish you a very happy Christmas and a wonderful 2014 xsx Sandra