Comment from rhonny

Excellent

Very interesting use of words to provide us with a picture of the vampire at work. Your lines flow very well and the picture you chose does the rest.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013

Thank you, Ronny. I appreciate your kind comments on the presentation and structure. I appreciate the encouragement.

reply by rhonny on 24-Nov-2013

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Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks for entering, Debi.

This is different and VERY funny.

Clever use of 'undead king' to refer to Dracula.

The lady in the artwork's expression is naughtily perfect as she ponders the situation. :-)

Good luck, Ted

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2013

Thank you, Ted. This was a fun contest with a lot of different takes on the old count. Thank you for creating it.

I am so pleased that you found this poem funny and enjoyed the naughty lady's dilemma.

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Great job in coming up with this little jewel of a masterpiece. Wonderful image in the picture that perfectly fits with your excellent poem.

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 Comment Written 21-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2013

Thank you, SteveY. I appreciate the gracious comments and encouragement. Thanks for reviewing.