Want to be your lover
Lyrical poem34 total reviews
Comment from Darkhorse555
from the beautiful black and white picture reading down your letter so much passion with words draws a really beautiful piece
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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from the beautiful black and white picture reading down your letter so much passion with words draws a really beautiful piece
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi Darkhorse,
thank you so much for this wonderful review and your excellent rating, it is most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from Gungalo
I want to be your lover... Be your all
Be the last thing you think of
before the final curtain falls......
With a write like this, she definitely will be JJ. She can't possibly turn you down. I'm impressed. Gee ...
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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I want to be your lover... Be your all
Be the last thing you think of
before the final curtain falls......
With a write like this, she definitely will be JJ. She can't possibly turn you down. I'm impressed. Gee ...
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi G,
thanks for the vote of confidence and for your wonderful review, I appreciate you.
Here's what I wrote in Jade's card:-
When love is true
It burns your heart
And means two souls will never part
When love is true
It comes to play
And takes away your yesterday
When true love sings
And I'm feeling blue
Perfect moments means time with you
When love is true
As time rolls on
Its in your life I belong
When love is true and so am I
I see the sparkle in your eye
When love is true
It is for life
And all because I love you...
My beautiful wife...
I can't write the rest you might blush... -smile, have a great weekend hope to catch up on your writes soon.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
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So beautiful JJ. Did she like it?
Comment from Curly Girly
When I read this...
I want to be your lover... Be your all
Be the last thing you think of
before the final curtain falls......
I thought - well marry her! But I see that you have. Well done!
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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When I read this...
I want to be your lover... Be your all
Be the last thing you think of
before the final curtain falls......
I thought - well marry her! But I see that you have. Well done!
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi Curly G,
yeah 23 years today, 30 years in total and I love her more today. Thank you for the wonderful review and excellent rating, most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from reconciled
Very beautiful write James....It quickens me to see....two....who have seen the best and worst of each other....and still hold their love as most important....from this we know there is hope....love ya bro....Michael.....shit I just realized....I don't have any sixes...cause...they didn't hand them out yet....my bad...whoops....lol
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Very beautiful write James....It quickens me to see....two....who have seen the best and worst of each other....and still hold their love as most important....from this we know there is hope....love ya bro....Michael.....shit I just realized....I don't have any sixes...cause...they didn't hand them out yet....my bad...whoops....lol
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi Michael,
words from you go right to the heart, my friend. We both thank you Jade and me... And no your not bad, but I thought you had gone on a sabbatical or something?... Just can't pull yourself away... Yeah me too.
Love you... Bro...
Kindest thoughts,
James
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job got postponed until the first....story of my life...haha