Pampered Pet
Things are never what they seem.32 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I bet someone tucks you in bed; .... into bed
yes this is very well written a sad poem I think the child gets everything he wants except love well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I bet someone tucks you in bed; .... into bed
yes this is very well written a sad poem I think the child gets everything he wants except love well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thank you Jill! Spoilt children do miss out sometimes. Thanks for the lovely review, I will sort the in, to, into. xsx
Comment from TammyGail
Always love your poetry sandra and indeed this is why - you weave such wit even into your children's ink - a message for any and all weaved into your lines - best of luck in the contest always a pleasure to bask your writing
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Always love your poetry sandra and indeed this is why - you weave such wit even into your children's ink - a message for any and all weaved into your lines - best of luck in the contest always a pleasure to bask your writing
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Tammy, thank you so very much!! I am sure this little boy would just love to be a part of your loving family! Thanks also for all those stars, Tammy, you are so kind. Thank you. xsx
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ever welcome sweetie :)