Seahorses and Mermaids
entry for contest36 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Hi, Mermaids. A great 5-7-5 contest entry. Your syllable count is precise. There's lovely personification with the dragon heart singing to the lady of the sea. "Tales of love Entwine" is excellent. Love conquers all, even in the sea. Interesting artwork. Good luck! judi
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Hi, Mermaids. A great 5-7-5 contest entry. Your syllable count is precise. There's lovely personification with the dragon heart singing to the lady of the sea. "Tales of love Entwine" is excellent. Love conquers all, even in the sea. Interesting artwork. Good luck! judi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha mermaids, What a nice poem about seahorses, I love those little creatures that are truly amazing. The mermaid must have been tickled pink. Thank you for sharing. Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Aloha mermaids, What a nice poem about seahorses, I love those little creatures that are truly amazing. The mermaid must have been tickled pink. Thank you for sharing. Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Yes, seahorses are so fascinating. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
Oh girl, this is so cute. You've shown us that the seahorse is an ideal character for your poem and that love flourishes beneath the sea.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Oh girl, this is so cute. You've shown us that the seahorse is an ideal character for your poem and that love flourishes beneath the sea.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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LOve your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
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SMile.
Comment from Spitfire
Ay, how sweet is that. Seahorses do look like miniature dragons. I can picture his tiny tail entwined with the mermaids larger one. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Ay, how sweet is that. Seahorses do look like miniature dragons. I can picture his tiny tail entwined with the mermaids larger one. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from GWHARGIS
I loved the armless embrace you described. It was a romantic poem that begged to be made into a longer poem. So, get started. It was truly a lovely poem.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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I loved the armless embrace you described. It was a romantic poem that begged to be made into a longer poem. So, get started. It was truly a lovely poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Oh, you are giving me ideas. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from John Lofburger
Of course the pentasyllabics are much better than the hepta-one. I mean more musical.
Tails of love entwine is a beautiful line, and the altogether structure is very good.
Beautiful and disturbing picture.
Shall love to read more from you.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Of course the pentasyllabics are much better than the hepta-one. I mean more musical.
Tails of love entwine is a beautiful line, and the altogether structure is very good.
Beautiful and disturbing picture.
Shall love to read more from you.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine