One More Dram
A story disguised as a poem--or vice versa.33 total reviews
Comment from ennahanid
You kept me fantastically entertained, the most fun I've read here for a spell and I have this really stupid Cheshire Cat grin on my face and I have to thank you for that...Darn! I wish I had that dram to give you to hear more - Dinah
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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You kept me fantastically entertained, the most fun I've read here for a spell and I have this really stupid Cheshire Cat grin on my face and I have to thank you for that...Darn! I wish I had that dram to give you to hear more - Dinah
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Dinah, thank you so much. The Cheshire Cat look suits you just fine. I'm so glad you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
Comment from adewpearl
strong rhyming couplets and excellent internal rhyme, also, that adds to the strong beat
love the rhyme of saddled/skedaddled
vivid descriptive detail
strong verb choices add dramatic effect to the story
you're a master story teller, be it in prose or poetry! :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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strong rhyming couplets and excellent internal rhyme, also, that adds to the strong beat
love the rhyme of saddled/skedaddled
vivid descriptive detail
strong verb choices add dramatic effect to the story
you're a master story teller, be it in prose or poetry! :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Brooke, thank you so much. You know I try to tread lightly on the poetry side of the aisle. I'm so glad you liked this. Peace, Lee
Comment from Scarbrems
Once again you put your excellent talent with the vernacular to good use. Another great yarn, well told. Nothing more to say.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Once again you put your excellent talent with the vernacular to good use. Another great yarn, well told. Nothing more to say.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thanks, emsey. I'm so glad you enjoyed! Peace, Lee