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Another Pretty Face

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Can love survive small town gossip?

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Oh, how romantic is Joe!!
I just love a little romance
and this chapter has plenty.

that held a three stone diamond ring.
that contained a ring set with three sparkling diamonds.

Just a thought.

Margaret

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


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    Thank you for your kind review and words of wisdom.
Comment from eliz100
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What a wonderful idea, a surprise wedding. It took me by surprise also. This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual.

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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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Oh what a lovely chapter. You have described a beautiful wedding setting and I hope Sarah doesn't make it too hard for Joe. So pleased to hear you are getting through the chemo in one piece - hope the rest isn't too rough! God bless :)
Giddy

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Comment from R. K. Alan
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So they finally get ready to walk down the aisle... maybe she has finally defeated the demons that tormented her (at least I hope so) or will they raise their ugly head once again. Ray aka Krylon

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


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    We shall see, but I think Sara finds some strength. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
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This is a very interesting chapter. I loved the natural and easy dialogues in this story. I'm going to miss Sara and Joe.
I'm so glad you're half way done with this phase of chemo. Am sure you're going to make it!
God bless dear Barbara.
Alba

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2011


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    Thank you for your kind review and your well wishes.
Comment from marcellawachtel
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this is all very exciting, and yes, we are used to her dithering- I sometimes wonder how he can stand it without blowing up. With hopes that the second half of this phase passes soon and successfully. Marcella

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    Thank you for your kind review and encouragment.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Barbara:

I'm happy you are halfway through your treatment. I will
continue to pray for you.

This is another excellent chapter. I think it is good for
Sara to continue to think things through before she agrees
to marry Joe so she can't throw in his face later that he rushed her into it.

Thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2011


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Comment from RebelRose
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Hang in there, friend. You won't let that chemo kick your butt. I love this chapter but I knew it wasn't going to end here. Sara doesn't seem too keen on the idea of moving away. As you say, she won't make it easy on him.

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Comment from fionageorge
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Yes, I am sure they need some space to talk. Wow, to have a wedding organisedd in half a day is amazing. But it sounds like they thought of everything. Let's hope she says 'yes'. Well written, good diallogue, great narrative. A very enjoyable part one of Chapter 15. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2011


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    I am not sure I would like a wedding, I didn't organize. We will have to see if Sara does. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
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Barbara, this is a good fun chapter. What a lovely plan for the wedding. However, a woman likes to make some of these decisions herself, so I can imagine Sara hesitating about that part of it. And the move should be ok... you'd think she would want to get away from that town. Good job and I'm looking forward to more.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2011


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    Sara does question everything being done for her. We'll have to wait and see how she respsonds.