Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Chatper 2 Part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from xxRowanHarperxx
I loved it very amazing chapter! Details were great, the painted a beautiful picture in my head! Interesting from the very beginning to the ending. I especially loved the artwork you chose for this chapter! Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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I loved it very amazing chapter! Details were great, the painted a beautiful picture in my head! Interesting from the very beginning to the ending. I especially loved the artwork you chose for this chapter! Great job!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from misscookie
Wow this is a very interesting story
this is very deep this story keep my interest from the first line to the last.
This is a good write.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Wow this is a very interesting story
this is very deep this story keep my interest from the first line to the last.
This is a good write.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Youare very welcome, have aniceevening.
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Youare very welcome, have aniceevening.
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Youare very welcome, have a nice evening.
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You are very welcome, have a nice evening.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, I can feel the shyness that Sara has, and at the same time, the wanting and need she has also. Joe is a very patient and understanding man, at least it seems like that at the moment. I hope he stays a good guy. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Barbara, I can feel the shyness that Sara has, and at the same time, the wanting and need she has also. Joe is a very patient and understanding man, at least it seems like that at the moment. I hope he stays a good guy. Keep writing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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He does stay patient and understanding, but he has a fault that we will see later. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from tspencer
Great story! I found this part very well written. I will be reading the next section. The dialogue reads in a natural way. The scenes well conceived and real and believable.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Great story! I found this part very well written. I will be reading the next section. The dialogue reads in a natural way. The scenes well conceived and real and believable.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continuing to follow.
Comment from fishcantswim
A well written chapter that flows well.
The speech and progression feel very natural.
Should the Spanish be in italics, to differentiate it? I don't know.
Anyway, an interesting read.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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A well written chapter that flows well.
The speech and progression feel very natural.
Should the Spanish be in italics, to differentiate it? I don't know.
Anyway, an interesting read.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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I don't either, about the Spanish, I have it different ways, and still haven't figured out which is correct. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I just love this story, each chapter gets me closer to Sara and Joe. I know Sara is in love with Joe but she is too shy to say the words. You have superb story telling skills making this one a joy to read and to look forward to. Well done...blessings, chey
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Hi Barbara,
I just love this story, each chapter gets me closer to Sara and Joe. I know Sara is in love with Joe but she is too shy to say the words. You have superb story telling skills making this one a joy to read and to look forward to. Well done...blessings, chey
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and appreciate your continued support.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and flow, and enjoyable read, i think i know where you're going with this and i am looking forward to it. great job as usual
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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this is very well written with good form and flow, and enjoyable read, i think i know where you're going with this and i am looking forward to it. great job as usual
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. We will have to see if you are correct.
Comment from patmedium
Stop apologising. I am (Horror of horrors) still enjoying the ride! You are SO self-effacing! And I am not one of your fans, so I suppose that lets me off? LOL. Pat. xxx
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Stop apologising. I am (Horror of horrors) still enjoying the ride! You are SO self-effacing! And I am not one of your fans, so I suppose that lets me off? LOL. Pat. xxx
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate you stopping by. I had to look up self-effacing.
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Good, I'm glad you looked it up! LOL. Now, Barbara, STOP it! you are an intelligent lady and a darned good writer ... you don't have to apologise to anyone here! xxx
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Thank you, but I just received a PM raking me over the coal, again. I do appreciate your kind words.
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Folk are so bloodymindedly cruel. They tack the name 'reviewer' to themselves and think that they are instant authorities, Poor Barbara. Please don't take it to heart. You are building a good story here, layer by layer. I do know about emotions, and having been a compulsive reader for most of my life, I can recognise a good author when I find one! Have you checked this person's other 'comments' to other writers? THEN Bar them! You've got three pe4rsonal choice 'stops' have you not? Use them! With respect, Pat. xx
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I have two other dear friends ths sight. They have mentioned I need to use the mute button. I am afraid of hurtings. I know I need to get over that. I have had it shouted at me.
Comment from L.lora
This post is exceptional
though you have one small
typo="Joe glanced over Cassie('s) shoulder."
It is smooth flowing, easy to read
and packed with emotion while
giving the reader further
insight into your characters
and adding a hint of mystery.
Looking forward to your next
post. Lora
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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This post is exceptional
though you have one small
typo="Joe glanced over Cassie('s) shoulder."
It is smooth flowing, easy to read
and packed with emotion while
giving the reader further
insight into your characters
and adding a hint of mystery.
Looking forward to your next
post. Lora
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and I will fix that typo.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
He's getting quite serious -
I feel that love is in the
air - I hope so - because I
do like a little romance.
wanted some alone time with you
wanted some time alone with you - unless it's to do with how you speak in the U.S.A. of course.
An enjoyable read, Barbara.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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He's getting quite serious -
I feel that love is in the
air - I hope so - because I
do like a little romance.
wanted some alone time with you
wanted some time alone with you - unless it's to do with how you speak in the U.S.A. of course.
An enjoyable read, Barbara.
Margaret.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.