Disgusting American Male
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Comment from Soulester
I picture you, sitting there and laughing your head off as you composed this poem. It does have a country musical cadence to it, and your choice of rhymes adds to the dark humor. Bottom line? (No pun intended...) This was a fun read. YOu are a nut. Mary
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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I picture you, sitting there and laughing your head off as you composed this poem. It does have a country musical cadence to it, and your choice of rhymes adds to the dark humor. Bottom line? (No pun intended...) This was a fun read. YOu are a nut. Mary
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you Mary!
I did have a few good chuckles coming up with this insane piece!
The funnest part of all is knowing you got a laugh too, and I thank you so much for that. And yes, I have been accused of being squirrel bait on occasion!
Curt
Comment from robertdarkstars
Absolutely hilarious ! I think this is a first class poem.
The rhyme rhythm and flow of the piece are all spot on, and where did you get that photo of my Grandad from!.With the chorus in between this could easily be made into a country and western song. Very well done.
Robert D
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Absolutely hilarious ! I think this is a first class poem.
The rhyme rhythm and flow of the piece are all spot on, and where did you get that photo of my Grandad from!.With the chorus in between this could easily be made into a country and western song. Very well done.
Robert D
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you Robert!
I have music mapped for this piece and am hoping to hit the studio soon!
Your Grandad (and mine!) was more than happy to oblige me the photo, in exchange for a paricularly ugly girl's phone number! (lol)
Thanks again my friend,
Curt
Comment from mermaids
You have me laughing here, you have some very graphic descriptions. I knew an individual who chased the not so good looking women because he stated they needed someone too. You did well with the verses and the chorus.
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You have me laughing here, you have some very graphic descriptions. I knew an individual who chased the not so good looking women because he stated they needed someone too. You did well with the verses and the chorus.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you!
This was just something I wrote to alleviate the monotony of more "serious" pieces, and to balance my muse's penchant for the dramatic!
Glad you got a chuckle from my warped humor!
Curt
Comment from percival86jack
WOW This is an absolute hoot my friend Curt!!! ROTFLMAO!!! You made this old geezer's day and tomorrow and for the next week. Very funny stuff my friend... LOVE IT!!! Cheers and happy giggling... Jack
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WOW This is an absolute hoot my friend Curt!!! ROTFLMAO!!! You made this old geezer's day and tomorrow and for the next week. Very funny stuff my friend... LOVE IT!!! Cheers and happy giggling... Jack
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks Jack!
The six is a tremendouos boost for the ego, but knowing you enjoyed the write that much is the real six for me.
A sequel for the "ladies" is coming soon!
Thanks again my friend, I am indeed honored,
Curt
Comment from words
The title caught my attention.
My first reaction was, "Oh no, not a male bashing verse".
Was pleased to see that while it may be male-bashing ... at least it is tongue in cheek and written by a male.
None the less, I do have a great fondness for the American Male, and I hate to hear him referred to as "Disgusting".
Got a kick out of your vivid descriptions.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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The title caught my attention.
My first reaction was, "Oh no, not a male bashing verse".
Was pleased to see that while it may be male-bashing ... at least it is tongue in cheek and written by a male.
None the less, I do have a great fondness for the American Male, and I hate to hear him referred to as "Disgusting".
Got a kick out of your vivid descriptions.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you!
I have a fondness for at least one digusting American male (me!)
This is just some of my warped humor leaking out of the holes in my head, and you have to admit that at least some men do fit the category!
Sincerely,
Curt
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Yes, but then I just think that they are "looking for love in all of the wrong places".
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"love" may not be the exact word I would use, but yea, I agree!
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, my - how hilarious is this...
but then, everyone needs a little
loving at some time whatever!!
I just love this one, Curt... and the
picture is the imagage of our village
idiot (as he calls himself) without his
teeth in - the hair and that cheeky
twinkle in his eyes -- just the same...
we found out today that he's been banned
from our local pub AGAIN!!! But I'm sure
he'll be back --- here's my six which this
so well deserves -- your style is so
unique, my friend -- keep 'um comin'.
Margaret.
that smells like [a] menthol and dirt. (whew!) - surely don't need the "a" here.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Oh, my - how hilarious is this...
but then, everyone needs a little
loving at some time whatever!!
I just love this one, Curt... and the
picture is the imagage of our village
idiot (as he calls himself) without his
teeth in - the hair and that cheeky
twinkle in his eyes -- just the same...
we found out today that he's been banned
from our local pub AGAIN!!! But I'm sure
he'll be back --- here's my six which this
so well deserves -- your style is so
unique, my friend -- keep 'um comin'.
Margaret.
that smells like [a] menthol and dirt. (whew!) - surely don't need the "a" here.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you Margaret!
I really do like to have some fun once in awhile with the words that dance in my head, and luckily my muse concurs!
Thank you so much my dear friend,
Curt
Comment from patmedium
Curt... you're a good lad. Just the sort of thing I've sung in the past. Did you ever review my SSSOOOOO boring? It was one of my most requested songs. I love this. Takes me right back to those pub singing days. Pat.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Curt... you're a good lad. Just the sort of thing I've sung in the past. Did you ever review my SSSOOOOO boring? It was one of my most requested songs. I love this. Takes me right back to those pub singing days. Pat.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks Pat!
I didn't know you were a singer! I sing in a choir, but that's because I can hide my voice with the good ones!
I really want to thank you for your thoughts, I am so happy you liked this bit of fun!
Curt
Comment from amel
Oh-- I'm a disgusting American male
Curt..curt..ooh I was so surprised when reading your title. Now I know that you could be serious but a have a great humorous side as well.
This part I love the most because made me a big smile
may be guilty of chasing some tail
but them ug-ly girls need lov-in too! Nice lyrics. Thank you for sharing me Curt. Blessings to you, amel
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Oh-- I'm a disgusting American male
Curt..curt..ooh I was so surprised when reading your title. Now I know that you could be serious but a have a great humorous side as well.
This part I love the most because made me a big smile
may be guilty of chasing some tail
but them ug-ly girls need lov-in too! Nice lyrics. Thank you for sharing me Curt. Blessings to you, amel
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you Amel!
I have a wide range of topics I like to write about, as you probably have found out. I think it's a matter of balance, so many "dark" poems to so many 'light" ones, but then again, I may be bipolar!
I am so glad you enjoyed this bit of warped humor!
Curt
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You are welcome and nice to read yours, Curt. Always entertaining. warmest wishes, amel
Comment from Kellytr
Hey Curt, Didn't you mean Disgusting Aussie Male - well, you could have! Maybe Disgusting Universal Male would best fit the bill. Whatever - good fun, and sounds like this one would go great with music. Cheers, Kelly
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Hey Curt, Didn't you mean Disgusting Aussie Male - well, you could have! Maybe Disgusting Universal Male would best fit the bill. Whatever - good fun, and sounds like this one would go great with music. Cheers, Kelly
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thanks Kelly,
I thought of making it "worldwide," but the tune needed the extra syllables! I have music I am composing for the piece, and as soon as my friend is back at his studio, I plan to record it.
Wish me luck!
Curt
Comment from pugdogy
absolutely excellent job here,,,,I really got a laugh out of this one,,,and yes it would make a good song,,,them folks hanging out in bars looking at people through drunk eyeballs might end up with anything....good job!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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absolutely excellent job here,,,,I really got a laugh out of this one,,,and yes it would make a good song,,,them folks hanging out in bars looking at people through drunk eyeballs might end up with anything....good job!!!!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Thank you!
I am always honored when I receive the coveted "six", but when I get one for having fun it's a double treat!
I am so happy you enjoyed this piece of mine, and thank you once again for your genorous rating and thoughts,
Curt