haiku (inside the cabin)
after the death of his wife32 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
this rings so true to me...because i have been there before...my was a death...someone just never came home...it was horrible...good job on this and thanks for the read. yours, diana
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2008
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this rings so true to me...because i have been there before...my was a death...someone just never came home...it was horrible...good job on this and thanks for the read. yours, diana
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2008
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Thanks. I am sending this off to Japan for publication. Do you have any suggestions that would improve it?
Comment from Judian James
Well done Alvin. The picture immediately drew me in, and then the words were so poignant and real. I believe what you said to be true as well.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2008
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Well done Alvin. The picture immediately drew me in, and then the words were so poignant and real. I believe what you said to be true as well.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2008
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I am glad the picture drew you in, because I am sending this off to Japan and the judge is much more harsh on the photo part of the haiga than the poem. Thanks for a good review.
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When you have a minute review my "Marguerite" will you? Oh, and the best of luck with the Japanese competition!