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Comment from royowen
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A great piece of artwork dear Debi, and yep, even murder is forgivable...if one turns away from the world and puts their faith in the one that will save them, and cause their change of direction, a beautifully written post dear Debi, telling it as it is, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Hi there, Roy. You always have the right words and know your bible better than most so I appreciate all that you have to say about my poem., Thanks again so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. I respect your knowledge of God's word so very much, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by royowen on 28-Nov-2024
    Well done
Comment from DonandVicki
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Your first line pulled me into your poem, "We have two choices in this life, one is to follow God" the other choice is obvious and a death wish for all those that take the wide path.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Hi Don and Vicki, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friends.
    Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
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This is an excellent waring to those who may be following the wrong road. I'm glad God looks on the heart and that only he is the Judge. If one really believe something to be a sin and does it any way, his guilt will not allow them happiness. They need to ask forgiveness that only God can grant AN excellent poem.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Beth, your comments meant so very much to me and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Our life on earth is simply in preparation, saved to witness to others and share His words, readying ourselves for our Heavenly Home. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Hi Ric, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
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Beautiful, Debi! A message that every one of us should read and take to heart. Several of my children and grandchildren have taken a different path and it scares me. My daughter says she believes but her way of living denies it. I guess praying is all that we can do.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
    Hi Carol, you are absolutely right and I have children and grands too that I worry about. Just like yours. So you inspired one more line in the poem. Would you please tell me what you think? Thanks so much!! Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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AMEN! Time is drawing nearer all the time until Jesus returns and we need to make sure we're right with God. Jesus will guide us in the right direction. We just need to allow him to do it. Thank you for sharing this inspired poem with us.

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Hi Barb, and thanks so very much for such an awesome review for my path to Heaven poem. I appreciate all your kind words. Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi